All Comments on 'Obsessed with Ember'

This is my first submitted story on Literotica, so please forgive my typos. I was a bit in a rush to publish. I did not use an editor, next time I surely will. I am very much open to constructive criticism. Thank you for checking out my story. More to come.

I like it! :)

Keep updating!

continue I want more

Please don't let me wait too long for what happens next...please! :D

Please continue........

Thank you for those that read my first story and for the comments. If you liked Obsessed with Ember then I hope you may like my first published ebook... it's a non-human interracial romance with a good guy and bad guy. This will be my second written story, hope you enjoy it. check out my bio for where to find it.

Oh, and I will be adding ch 2 to Ember and Vincent.

Can you please make a part 2!! It's been forever!!

please continue on with this story. i am dying to find out what happens.

Love it!

Please accept my apology for the crazy long wait. As other authors have put it, life did get in the way as well as writer's block. Part 2 should be on here very, very soon... that is, if I don't run into any submitting issues with Literotica.

Well thank you for the comments.

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Sorry for this super late update. You wouldn't believe how hard it is to get a reliable editor. I finally got one, he was great with his input. I hope to use him in the future. Thank you Mike!

Now just waiting for Literotica to approve chapter 2. They have rejected it twice so far. Hopefully the third try is the charm.

As always, rate me and leave a comment. Initially my first chapter was a stand-alone. So it was a one page wonder... to me. If anyone has any ideas I am definitely open. Currently working on chapter 3. Patience please. I have nerve... been waiting forever for some other stories I follow to be updated. So I understand readers, trust me on that. But I hope I have made up for the long wait with this lengthy chapter 2.

I wanted to ask. Do u post this story on a another site? Valent chamber?

It's been years but I still love your story