I love your story so far. I like the incest stories for some reason. Can wait to see more to come keep up the good work.
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Anonymous12/09/12
Yes!!
I'm liking it so far. The dialogue really adds to the story & it's very hot hearing(?) the dgtr talk about how she loves Daddy's fucking best of all. Also like how she dresses up for him. Hope there'll be more!!
I have read a few of your stories and Brett... I have to say I have not been disappointed.. well only a little, they are too short..... please write some 5 and 9 page stories..... lol,,,,, thanks for the great read.
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Hope there is more to this episode. Great story, Thanks.
Nice
I love your story so far. I like the incest stories for some reason. Can wait to see more to come keep up the good work.
Yes!!
I'm liking it so far. The dialogue really adds to the story & it's very hot hearing(?) the dgtr talk about how she loves Daddy's fucking best of all. Also like how she dresses up for him. Hope there'll be more!!
yeah
good shit!.. keep writing I'll keep reading
WOW!
Love it totally
thank you for the good story
amazing
I have read a few of your stories and Brett... I have to say I have not been disappointed.. well only a little, they are too short..... please write some 5 and 9 page stories..... lol,,,,, thanks for the great read.
Good story
I wouldn't mind reading more about these two.
I'd also love to read about Jewel and the incestuous Swedish stewardesses!
So fucking hot!! Please consider expanding on the encounter with the three Swedes. That sounded delicious.
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