Another great story.....thanks
Had the biggest grin when I saw you had returned to Lit, and after listening to that audio that grin is now 10 times bigger! Wow, fantastic stuff. Welcome back!
Awesome as always...wasn't expecting that little twist tho
I saw that you had come back to Lit this morning. Didn't have time have a listen but drove back from work during my lunch break to enjoy. I was not disappointed, welcome back!
So excited to see you back! Look forward to hearing what else you stored up in that dirty little mind of yours during 'retirement'!
that was hot
Nice short story with lots of food for the imagination.
Its great to have you back at literotica sharing your awesome stories. This is a great reentry to this forum, sexy, sensual, taboo, and always hot.
You have a very sultry voice and a hot, exciting mind. You are my dream girl. I tried playing your audios while I was near to waking up, and lets just say.. there was some laundry to do that morning. Please keep it , and me , up.. Thanks.
i would love to hear more stories like this it was a huge turn on would love to hear more
I did myself a disservice by "reading" this first. It is certainly a fun introductory tease in text, but the art is truly in your performance of it. While mine is the domain of detailed, complex imagery and treating readers to interesting positions and erotic situations, yours is the domain of wonderful, immersive acting that draws the listener into the room, right beside you as everything happens.
This was a very artful approach to telling a story from only one side. There were some times where I thought a reciprocal male role would have been more effective, but you manage to cover up that absence quite satisfactorily. You can certainly feel the passion from your voice, and I could picture your partner's expressions with only a little bit of creative license. It doesn't feel like a blow-by-blow commentary, either, as happens with a poorly adapted screenplay or stage narrative. I don't think I'm qualified to judge acting, but I certainly enjoyed it!
There is only one technical detail to report (it is a nitpick, and completely unrelated to the performance itself...so don't take it too seriously), and that is a bit of "clipping" around the 23:00 mark. This occurred while listening to the ogg version of the production. If you would like some details about what this is and how to fix it, feel free to contact me about it.
Glad you're back.....love your stories
This was sooooooooo hot I wanted to give it a 10! Welcome back sexy
This was a REALLY GOOD story. You certainly have a talent for doing this kind of thing. You make the rest of us feel we would be wasting out time trying to match it.
I read the text first, and I was a bit disappointed until the part that is almost entirely sound effects started. WOW! Now, that's the way an audible story should be told.
Thanks for some coming back and with another incest story and speaking of that. Part 4 of A Tale Of Forbidden Love needs to be made
Typical, meaning AWESOME, and immediately saved so I can hear it again and again. ^_^
great to see you back again, and with such a hot story! The topic is taboo but still your voice makes it irresistible. But I do hope you'll work with mejau to complete "A Tale of Forbidden Love" which for me is the single best thing on all of Lit!
You're stories are quite simply amazing. I love the taboo nature of this one and " Under My Wing." Thanks for sharing them and yourself with us.
I fucking love this one raven, my favourite! So hot and naughty. Can we get a sequel this year?
I've listened to this over and over ever since I've discovered you on Literotica! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do a sequel to this. By far the most erotic cock jerk audio I've ever heard! I need more!!
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