All Comments on 'My Best Friend Tom'

and the friend that went and fucked her anyway deserves to have his fiance find out and get rid of his ass.

YOU play you pay fuck those that screw around on their loved ones.

they are all worthless trash

Another prime example that Literotica has NO standards. Should be shutdown.

I would hate to see who it would be erotic to,ick

Two ignorant anonymous "critics" panning a good story simply because they don't agree with it's theme.

No regard for whether or not it's a well written piece of erotic fiction.

Stupidity in action.

I have no experience with cuckoldry, nor do care to have any but I do recognize good pornography that deserves 5 stars. This is one example

A legit topic, but not for me. Seems sick.

This crap deserves 5 stars? Good pornography? You got to be kidding! Of course the standards of some is so low any trash will do.

go tell your fathers and brothers what kind of story you like.

I'd rather be an ignorant anon than a dumbass moron like you.

This isn't English 101, I don't care how fucking good you think it's written. The subject matter is shit and that makes the story shit. 1*

So you score a story on how well it's written, regardless of content. Wow, who is the ignorant idiot now. So any well written piece of trash is worthy of 5 stars? If ignorance was bliss you would take the cake. Sorry, I score a story not only on it's grammar merit but also on its erotica content, and frankly these type of stories I don't find erotic. Unfortunately for most readers this is what we've been getting lately. Score: 1* for effort.

and yes, I didn't like it, but it seems there is more to this story than what's being said here.

What about the husband not putting up any resistance, what about the remark about

destroying his carreer? Did he do something before and is this revenge for him to put up with the consequences? She's seems a cold hearted bitch, the way she acted with Tom. If there's more to come, don't wait an eternity, this story isn't something to stay with the readers for long.

What the hell was that? If it could possibly be a true story, or even a fantasy about a real wife, just kill her. Shit that was't fun at all.

I would appreciate some of the backstory. How was hubby abused? How was he first cuckolded?

Up to the crap the wife brings up about pregnancy, it was rather stimulating.

Just dump the slut, dude.Oh, and see a therapist!

I think stories like this should have at least one person to route for. Slow down, too!

That story was without a doubt, a huge waste of time. Why would he not just kick the bitch out like she deserved and screw her in the divorce any way possible. Made NO sense.

No and No. First failure in this story? No long time friend would have given her the 20 dollars and gone downstairs. Risk his impending marriage for a few minutes? Nope. No husband would have let things go that far. If the wife had continued to push, the questions of no respect and no love would have been brought up and a divorce promised for an unfaithful slut. So this silly tale would have NEVER happened. Not even in a fantasy.

I would have smashed Tom and threw her ass out on the street what a pussy

Pass the word what a bitch of a slut she is. Her motivation is revenge over every man she meets. Did not like the story. Not thought out. In other words a stud like me, would never get a messed up bitch like that. No matter if her cuckold says yes. Word on the street spreads faster than almost the internet. All the studs would run and hide from this witch.

Three really shitty people! An abusive ,cheating wife,a betraying "best friend",and a husband who is a sorry excuse for a man!

Tom got pussy from Alice. He got paid by Paul. He held a terrible secret over Paul. He was about to become a smug bastard. But then he learned what he stood to lose. He deserves the outcome of his treachery to the man he could never again consider is his friend. I would like to see that Tom gets everything he deserves ...lose his friend, lose his fiance, lose his good paying job, has to pay child support.

It's purely amazing at the drivel that people can write. -5000 Stars on this one!

I would to read of the history of the marriage and why she is so angry.

Loved it

Whisky tango foxtrot ? What a horrible fucking story with shit people and no reason behind any of it. 1*