I love it. Thank you.
Darkly haunting, and beautiful.. thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this, it was hot, exciting, and darkly haunting. 5 stars. X
I felt for sure she was fucking his son...but the ash taste was different. Thanks Don
Why did you stop posting. A shame from our point of view.
we only can lament again that you are posting no more stories.
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A most beautiful tale.
I love it. Thank you.
Darkly haunting, and beautiful.. thank you for sharing.
Fantastic
I really enjoyed reading this, it was hot, exciting, and darkly haunting. 5 stars. X
Weird, but enjoyably different.
I felt for sure she was fucking his son...but the ash taste was different.
Thanks Don
We enjoyed this story very much.
Why did you stop posting. A shame from our point of view.
After re-reading the story
we only can lament again that you are posting no more stories.
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Back to Smoke or
More submissions by MrsSmith_Shhh.