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Rain Dancing

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by sassysuzaz09/23/13

Very erotic

Such a sweet and erotic story. I so wanted you to touch her skin... Mmm you made me terribly wet. Thank you. Xo

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by Anonymous04/19/16

A beautiful story!!!

All of sloeburn stuff is so sexy and well written. Shows a lot intellectual and emotional maturity.

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