man that Andy is a real jerk I really hope he comes to regret his decision as it is too cruel a thing to do they clearly are in love and sooner or later her delusional world is gonna fall apart and it will be more crushing than thanksgiving
Andy isn't acting out of malice. He's handling a very stressful situation, about which he is horribly conflicted, the best way he can; not the best way it could be, perhaps, but the best way he can.
Remember, his sister is cast as extremely needy. Andy is in essence not just an authority figure; as her big brother, he really is an authority as far as Natalie is concerned. If he were a teacher and she were a student, or if he were a captain and she were a private, this relationship would be considered abusive.
If you have ever been in a relationship with a needy person (and I have), you know how seductive it can be. It can also become cloying, especially if you come to realize that all you really have in common is hero-worship on one side and an inflated ego on the other. If, instead, you see yourself as a rescuer (as Andy clearly does) then all kinds of hell can break loose: you might run out of strength; the rescued might grow enough self esteem to resent being coddled; you might be stunting, rather than encouraging, the other person's growth.
Have you ever seen a young child clinging to its mother's leg when she drops him off for the first day of school? Before you condemn Andy for being a heel, imagine Andy dealing with Natalie as just a needy, clinging younger sister. Even without the sexual elements of the situation, this is neither healthy nor is it easy to deal with.
I like the build up and the conflicting emotions. Still not so jazzed about the addition of the sister. I think I would have preferred for the story to stay with the main two.
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you go girl...that's good thinking
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man that Andy is a real jerk I really hope he comes to regret his decision as it is too cruel a thing to do they clearly are in love and sooner or later her delusional world is gonna fall apart and it will be more crushing than thanksgiving
Don't be so hard on Andy
Andy isn't acting out of malice. He's handling a very stressful situation, about which he is horribly conflicted, the best way he can; not the best way it could be, perhaps, but the best way he can.
Remember, his sister is cast as extremely needy. Andy is in essence not just an authority figure; as her big brother, he really is an authority as far as Natalie is concerned. If he were a teacher and she were a student, or if he were a captain and she were a private, this relationship would be considered abusive.
If you have ever been in a relationship with a needy person (and I have), you know how seductive it can be. It can also become cloying, especially if you come to realize that all you really have in common is hero-worship on one side and an inflated ego on the other. If, instead, you see yourself as a rescuer (as Andy clearly does) then all kinds of hell can break loose: you might run out of strength; the rescued might grow enough self esteem to resent being coddled; you might be stunting, rather than encouraging, the other person's growth.
Have you ever seen a young child clinging to its mother's leg when she drops him off for the first day of school? Before you condemn Andy for being a heel, imagine Andy dealing with Natalie as just a needy, clinging younger sister. Even without the sexual elements of the situation, this is neither healthy nor is it easy to deal with.
Interesting
I like the build up and the conflicting emotions. Still not so jazzed about the addition of the sister. I think I would have preferred for the story to stay with the main two.
@ Dont be so hard on andy
I agree, but logic is generally ignored in porn. And drama.
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