All Comments  for

Photoshoot with Loving Wife

byTEBJrNghwJqw©
All
Comments (26)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by ythebadger12/10/12

Well enough written

but the motives were too obscure to be understood and that robbed it of any sense of reality. Perhaps a longer piece might have been more interesting.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Erotonaut12/10/12

Alternate agenda?

Seems to me DW knew what she wanted all along. He was lucky she didn't let Cliff fuck her right in front of him.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by x_witless_x12/10/12

What a filthy disobedient juicy bad slut.

I'm apoplectic with rage and disgust. 4*

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by 12/11/12

Show and Shoot

Sometimes I come to this site for a quick thrill. Sometimes I come here because I want to develop a relationship with a character. As I imagine myself in DW's place, I am definitely getting a quickie... but I like quickies! I hope there are more stories to follow this one. I think I would like to know DW better.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by mudhentwo12/11/12

Blow jobs are fun!

I wonder how far she would have gone? Thanks for a hot story!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/11/12

Got me Hard

I love a good girl turned bad story.
Was hoping she would just go "ooops" and fuck the shit out of him :)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Remain_in_shadow12/11/12

A good one

A cautionary tale of fulfilling your fantasies, and the terrible, wonderful, awful, sexy and liberating things that you might experience giving in to your desires.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/11/12

Stunning

A delightfully erotic vignette into a fantasy I have often held, and the dare to dream just how far would it go, far enough, or too far ? ? ? ?This one hits it right on the head (pardon the pun), specific, well paced, absorbing, and definitely erotic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by oldtwit12/11/12

Great

What a great story, short, but so sensual, well thought out and written well.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/12/12

Hot

Hot story! Did you consider checking the spelling? It isn't difficult and it so improves the reader's perception of the author

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/12/12

Editing

Needs editing and to be run through spell check.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/13/12

short, funny and hot :)

i like a good quickie, treating with a fantasy of mine, seeing how it might play out, and with some good, dry humour. this story is like a Christmas cookie, small & tasty - i'm glad i tried it!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Bridget195712/13/12

I liked your story

All and all it was a good story line. Could have been a little more indepth at certain points.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by TEBJrNghwJqw12/23/12

Updated

Author here. I missed some spelling issues the first time (ugh!) so I issued a revision. It should read a little easier :)
Part two coming!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Justtoold12/24/12

good

Liked the story. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LikesGoodWriting01/15/13

so real i can see it

I always enjoy stories that are believable. The faster pace of the writing during the shooting really reflected the pace on the action.. more reality.

thanks !

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Drbeamer333302/24/13

If your going to do this, you need to have a talk and set clear boundaries.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/21/13

Which one is the bigger slut?

The wife or the idiot husband?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by WifeWatchman07/12/13

Nice story

Very nice story, I look forward to reading more from you.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LarryArcher08/06/13

Great story pretty true to life

From being in the lifestyle, this has happened a lot more than you would really believe. I bet the next time, he lets his wife screw the guy. But what he should do is pick up another couple so it's much harder to be jealous of your wife sucking dick when his wife is sucking yours. Ignore all of the "gross" comments from straights, they have no clue as to what is really going on around them.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/18/13

Film Her

I like the way you went around and did what you wanted. Connie and I started that way and soon went to more. My wife got so turned on she could stop. From the first time with one now she is with five of our friends at once. She hope to get their wifes to join .

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/17/14

Needs a sequel

In this one, he needs to watch and take photos while Cliff bones her. Then, during the shoot, she takes off the condom and lets him fuck her bareback and cum in her, without any birth control.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by honeylicker112410/10/14

Hot...but

What is wifey's name? You don't say in the beginning, and then you call her DW and towards the end it's Lana.
You say she is the mother of their three kids. Where are the kids? Are they playing in the next room, able to walk in at any time?

Little details help make a story. Still gave it 4 *'s

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous01/16/15

good wife

A really good wife would not rush to the other room and spit out the cum but kiss her husband and share the cum.O

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Wendylooking4Bbc05/12/16

Luscious

I hope she will get to have that Hugh cock buried inside her next time

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/29/16

wife's Photo shoot

My wife and I enjoy the outdoors,going place's in with little town like some of the river town's not far from us.my wife has alway's been playfull at home or out she has a nice body and her eye's struck me the first time I saw her.at some point I had asked my wife if she would wear something sexy when we were going out to dinner,she asked what I had in mind I said well it would be nice to see in your blouse and see your chest and maybe a shelf bra so I might be able to see those perfect nipples of your's she smiled and said if you get to see someone else might get to see also.I said if there lucky enough.
We went out and she was wearing a great outfit and as she said it wasn' t just me but we both enjoyed the attenion she got from other men,she started to do this more often and got very good at making it seem as if she was unaware they could see so much as time went on I had told her I wish she could have seen that guy face when he noticed after a while of doing this and me saying that she said take a picture next time so at some point I did .
She would remember at what time he saw her and how he reacted and just smile and say good for him.
One day while we were out I said to her I wish we could go out enjoy our time out and someone else take picture's of what go's on,she said that would be nice so we could be together the hole time
I day while I was home I started looking to see if we could find someone to take these photo's and found that that would be hard and might cost a bunch .One guy suggested we go someplace that he could take picture's outside she could wear what she wanted,but it would more set up and in control with out the other people around,I thought that would still be good he would see her and it could look as if he just came across her at a time she was unaware
I told my wife and she said really when so I new then she was ok with this,we met with him first and talked about outfits what we were looking for and where,and at one point she said to me this is close to what you wanted maybe someone will happen by and not realize what were doing and the guy said if you really someone else there he could get a friend to act as the stranger,she just said that would perfect and for me now two guy's are going to spend time looking at my wife.
We did the shoot and it was great it took about 4 hour's we went different place's all close to each other and she was willing to do whatever he thought would be a good picture including her wearing and open dress shirt of mine with nothing else on and his friend right with her.
I asked her not long after if at any point if I had asked would she would have let him get close to were it seem ed like they were going to have sex or touch each other would she have.She just said well you should have asked when you had a chance I would have done it in a heart beat you felt how wet I was when we got home.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Photoshoot with Loving Wife  or
More submissions by TEBJrNghwJqw.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel