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It Began on a Christmas Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/15/13

Gag me now! Gah!!!

I kept reading this series expecting it to get better as most do however I was disappointed as it just got worse. I usually get horny reading literotica but I actually felt the need to puke and to somehow erase this series from my mind. Gross!

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by Anonymous04/08/13

Blech!!!

I agree! I felt like I needed a bath after reading this. Yuck.

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by tatasult07/12/13

please do new

as you wrote down Mom has a child /granddaughter from son and Daughter has a son from her dad, and they both are siblings, please continue after grown of those incestious childs...and how reveals the truths...

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by animaluver4007/30/13

Great and yummy story

Please keep going on this story please but add some D/s but keep on going with the 2females but somehow let the parents catch the youngsters doing each other again great story

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by Anonymous09/05/13

Love the story

Every twist in this story makes it even more exciting

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by Anonymous07/11/15

Good story!

Aww :/ Im sad The mother died.. I mean she was younger than the dad so that sucks :( But none the less I still enjoyed this story!!! I have to say this wasnt my favorite chapter but like I said, LOVE THIS STORY!!! :) Good job! I think it's very hot and it made me horny like crazy!!

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