All Comments on 'Builders Slut Ch. 01'

Considering nearly half of this first chapter was explaining who she was, what she looked like, and how out of character it was for her to be out drinking; this hasn't gone far enough.

and now it's time for action -- please! Take care...

Good start - even better if it's really true!

I thought it was just starting too

And a good first story from a new author. I will look forward to chapter 2

If this s or had been a piece of fiction, I would have given it a thumbs down for creativity, but life rarely happens that way. It also jumped into action without building much of a good story line.

However, relating to a personal experience, it is kind of interesting, but "God! what is happening to me, why is this guy affecting me like this" type of feeling just isn't there even though the writer had stated this was out of her normal routine.

Very good- would like to read more.

just getting started, can't wait for the other guy to step in

Looking forward to the next adventure.

So far so good, Looking forward to reading chapter 3

To Natalie,

I don't care if this is fantasy or reality, you write really well, it's creative, detailed in all the right places and it fires my imagination. Simple request, write more and don't make us wait to long.

What it says on the tin. ;) x

I am a man but you describe my favorite way of taking a cock. At no time am I as contented as when I am at a mans feet, him holding my head as I take his cock into my mouth and do my utmost to swallow him. I love the feel of his pubic hair on my face and his balls slapping my chin. If I do a good job and he starts bucking his hips driving his cock into me I am in heaven. I do like to have him shoot his cum onto my lips and toung so I can taste him before I swallow and I do love sucking ral hard as I clean him. If we are laying down I like to hold him in my mouth and suckle his cock till he gets hard again. I can do this untill he falls a sleep with his soft cock in my mouth. I try to go to sleep like that but if not possible I will try to wake him later with me laying down with his morning hard in me and if possible get him to do his morning pee into my mouth then clean him and give a good morning climax. Some like that some do not. Been kicked a few times but it is worth it for the good guys. You would think you could tell how a guy is going to react after you give him so many climaxes the night before and some even claim to love you. Oh well. Love your story from one slut to another.

Hi Natalie

You have a clear understanding of the anatomy of the penis. That is to be admired.

I like your words.

GT

So sad you stopped writing. Love the honesty of your prose.

Wow.. Natalie, you have talent both in writing & pleasuring this lucky guy.! Had to stop & restart reading twice & now my lappy keys are sticky.! I shall read on & enjoy every second.. Bravo.!

Hi Natalie - this is a great start with endless possibilities to follow. I'm looking forward to developments and to finding out just how slutty you are.

Excellent, love the descriptive action

Oh yes! I like this a lot. Amy x