All Comments on 'Tied Up with Tinsel'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good visuals

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I liked this too

Often banter-heavy stories begin to drag and seem like the author is trying to show off how terribly clever he is - you avoided that trap and did a great job. And "turned part of me to stone"; heh heh, worth an eye roll but also a chuckle. 5 stars

Rugrat60Rugrat60over 11 years ago
Nicely Done

Well done and good descriptions.

I Enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I am Kenyan lady and this story was quite an interesting read. Thumbs up for a good job. Would love to have an experience like that, but i have to find a soul mate first. My biological clock is ticking fast heh. Anyway, thank you for a well written story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A GOOD READ

it was a wonderful story, you did a very nice job

keep up the writing , and these two could be a couple in another story.

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