Little Sister, Big Secret

Trash? WTF

What the fuck is Anonymous talking about? What did he read? Certainly not what I just read. Great story and I enjoyed it.
Quit hiding behind Anonymous and show us your great work so the rest of us can learn..................

Whew!

That was, by far, one of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Thanks and keep up the good work.

hot

soo hot i hope there is going to be more chapters looking forward to them if there is

Well described...

....with the teasing and with the sex. Believable with Emma being in porn and interesting how she 'enticed' him to take pictures of her. This would be the average guy's dream to have a sister that looked like that and to have that chance. I hope you plan on adding more chapters! :)

Wow!

Now that was hot. Very well written, perfect pacing and, did I mention, hot?
Tanks you very much for your effort.

AWESOME!

Plain and simple.

Nice

more please

Holy Shit!

What a great story that one was, as a matter of fact, I'm 32 and my sister is 30.We have been fucking each other for well over ten years. It started when she was 20 and I was 22, and we've been together ever since, and plan on staying together for the rest of our lives.

Mark and Amy

PLEASE write a sequel!

BEST STORY EVER!

I LOVED your story please keep this story going.

Minor suggestion

I loved the story, but I thought (or maybe hoped) it was going to end a little differently. The way I was envisioning it was having the sister confess to deliberating making the porn with that particular adult video company because she knew her brother had some of their films in his collection. Therefore, he would be familiar with the logo and name on the envelope. Furthermore, despite the story suggesting the sister only found out about her brother's visit to their parent's house from her friend within the last day or so, I was thinking she knew before hand. She would know far enough in advance to have the production company send her a copy so it would arrive while her brother was at her parent's. On the day the sister knew the DVD sample would be delivered and her brother would come home, she specificaly waited in hiding outside until she saw her brother bring the mail inside. She would then wait a while longer to let her brother's curiousity get the better of himself. I think this version of the ending would make it obvious the sister had planned the incest from the start, and in a way it might be more believable since it did not happen as spontaneously as the existing story leads the reader to believe.

Great buildup

I like the story, but I did not care too much for the ending. It seemed a little over-the-top for her to be all "Actually I tricked you. ha ha." Other wise it is a good story with a great buildup. I really like how you focus on the characters' reservations. It makes the situation seem more realistic.

SO HOT

I only lasted until the middle of the 2nd page! The build up was great, and there were very few punctuation errors, so overall it was an amazing read!

totally hot

great incestuous sex scenes, nice sibs, well-written-thanks

more?

I think you should do more just for the hell of it.

Excellent.

Great story, well told

Holy fuck that was a long ass sex scene!! Lol

So, sis is going to become a poor star?

Brad was jealous of the guy on the DVD, but his sister going on to fuck dozens, maybe hundreds, of other guys doesn't bother him at all. I'm disappointed. This ending doesn't work well for me.

she should go back to the pron company. and my incest films for them with her brother. not make movies for thousands of other guys.

i swear..

If the company gets their shots and demands that they BOTH be their new employees, I'll bust a gut by laughing my ass off. Seriously. XD

Hot story please write more.

Awesome !

That was one hot story, definitely one of the best short stories I've read on here.

Just WOW !

I couldn't even begin to think about having a sister that got into porn, I think it would break my heart! :(

This turned out to be a pretty good story though, pretty enjoyable.

Pretty hot!

You need some editing and proofreading and a thesaurus. 'Adorable' and 'quim' are grossly overused. Plus, I despise pregnancy or references to pregnancy in my porn. Despite all this, though, I liked the story and the characters are especially well done.

If there were porn with me in it?

The last thing I'd do is have the production company mail me a DVD of this... to my parents' address?

Get a PO Box, you two!

???

So she wants to be a skank whore. I guess they make A LOT of money for a little bit. IF your good you last on average a year and then your VERY dead on average in three years. BUT so much fun for a little bit then dead...

Very Nice sister sex story

but sampkyang is correct. heard it all on a radio interview. over 50% of the porn sex shows seen on the internet has beautiful women that are currently rotted in a box 6 feet under.