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by Anonymous

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by larry7440312/11/12

A very good story.

A very good effort. I liked it alot. Will there be more to it?

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by Anonymous12/11/12

NICE

CONTINUE STORY

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by Anonymous12/11/12

another waste of time

if she is constantly taking to long in the shower WHY doesn't he get up earlier and use it before she gets up? he is just as stupid as all the assholes on the turnpike that read the paper, put on makeup and eat breakfast because they are to stupid to get up early enough.

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by Anonymous12/11/12

Fucking Rubbish

Falling over and landing on is cock what does he think we ate mroons

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by ChasB12/11/12

An accidental fuck - highly improbable, but I LIKE it! Do it again, if you can!

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by Tashtim12/12/12

crap

This is retarded writting.the whole story is just shit.falling backwards into penetration?r u stupid,who would believe that impossible shit

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by Anonymous12/12/12

I'm with ChasB on this one...

SOOOOOOOOO rare a chance....but who cares? It was funny it was sexy and it was a great short story! No complaints from me! Awesome job!

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by reader23012/12/12

Wow

That was awesome!!! Please continue this story, it is one of the hottest on here.

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by Anonymous12/12/12

Funny and sexy

a funny read with a sexy twist. As for the haters. Tashtim. Where's your story?

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by daytymer12/12/12

Made me laugh

Braindard, some stories are meant to be fun, this one was. Made me laugh made me hard. To all the critics, get a life!

Keep on writting,

Daytymer

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by ansdguy12/12/12

Loved it...

after all, this is fiction. With all the crazy crap that you can read in some of these stories, this isn't that far out there. I mean, how can a guy be fucking his family member while fingering her ass, playing with her clitty and sucking her tits, all at the same time? That shit makes me dizzy. I thought this little story was very cute and erotic, too.

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by Anonymous12/14/12

Loved it!

Great short story! Simple and straight to the point, while spending good time were it counts, the sex scene!

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by CoventinaNyx01/06/13

Funny & Hot

Oops I fell into incest! lol This story was cute and funny. Keep writing!

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by NecroGirl02/27/13

Hot!

I adore the "slipped and fell on a c*ck" storyline! It becomes even more delicious when you add the taboo brother/sister element. Awesome story!

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by Anonymous04/08/13

holy shit

i came at least 7 times while reading this. nice work.

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by MasterLexi9705/12/13

mmmmmmm

I read this every morning and wish I was the little sister.

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by Anonymous06/03/13

One day I had a morning erection, my sister noticed it. she asked me to show it, I showed the erection, she removed her nighty and jumped on me, my penis touched her cunt, she enjoyed that and she herself put my penis in her cunt and began to raid. what a wonderful day that was!

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by Anonymous09/29/13

I'm getting off right now! Super hot!

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by Oleguy10/21/13

Thank whoever for fiction.

How lucky this lad was to avoid a possible permanent damage.
However fiction saved the day and his future.

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by Valerion01/15/14

Hot concept but...

..I'm betting a broken dick would have been more likely. But..I suppose that's why it's called fiction, huh? Fun story.

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by Anonymous06/19/14

OMG

Holy shit, this got me friggin' myself like three times!!!!! Great story.

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by Anonymous07/03/14

Shit dicks love story

Best sex story of my life

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by Anonymous07/30/14

hot

shot my load.lol

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by rightbank08/04/14

not very likely

but just as much fun as intended.
a bit of humour never hurt anyone.

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by Anonymous08/11/14

Hot

This is my favourite story on Literotica.

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by Anonymous10/05/14

Loved this story, would like to see a sequel to this

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Incest is best

Incest is best when you keep it in the family. Incest the game the whole family can play. I've been sleeping with my two sisters.

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by Anonymous04/11/15

Omg

This story made me cum so hard. I once had sex with my cousin it was hot as hell

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by Taljinn05/31/15

YES!!!!

This would never ever happen, but fucking damn is it hot! You rock, write a sequel!

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by Kookaburra806/20/15

Unfinished

don't stop now at chapter 1 you need to finish what you started. Soooo many ways you can go with this story. Just make sure she ends up getting a belly full of arms and legs.

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by Anonymous07/25/15

Great!....but toooooo short

You have spoiled me. Though this was sexy, hot, and as always well written, it was way to SHORT! Another chapter please!

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by Anonymous07/30/15

Hot as fuck

Omg it reminds me of the time me and my sis were sharing a bathroom Welles walked In on me while iwasgetting outand she happens to of grande it not paying atention she started stroking it and the one thing led to another and we fucked

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by Anonymous08/09/15

wow

I wish that would happen with me and my sister I think she would be pregnant before we left the bathroom.

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by lowkeyone11/07/15

WOW

Great story and thank you very much.

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by Anonymous11/10/15

brilliant

Wet,wet slippery wet. Nice story!!!

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by Anonymous11/25/15

I'd like a slip up too...

That was a good fun to read story. As I don't have a brother I'd love to slip like that onto my sons hard cock.

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by Anonymous12/16/15

Beautiful Fantasy

30yrs ago, me and my Sis at 15 and 13 respectively tried fucking in a toilet on a flight back home from UK boarding school to parents in US. Impossibly exciting 'til a stewardess banged on the door telling us to get out! Sadly never again!

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by Anonymous02/14/16

My sis

I want to do that to my sister

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by Anonymous04/19/16

Yes, so HOT especially when they both realize its what they have wanted for so long and kept screwing .... I wish you would right a part 2; so we knopw what Emma and her brother do from here. Thanks.

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by immattithink05/15/16

Improbable but entertaining.

It may be highly unlikely but this was well written and really entertaining. An arousing tale, you've won yourself a new follower in me!

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by Anonymous05/28/16

Smh...White people and incest

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by Anonymous06/20/16

Horny

Good enough to me to unleash a load

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by pegmehrd06/21/16

I've got two younger sisters that I would love to see naked and then have sex with!

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by Anonymous08/11/16

Nice!

I loved the way you wrote this story. You gave us enough character to be believable and still made it short enough that we want more! Maybe Part 2??

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by Anonymous08/29/16

Lucky Slip

Did you get your sister pregnant???

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by Anonymous09/09/16

"Smh...White people and incest"

Incest is hot, regardless of skin color.

Get the fuck out of here with your racism.

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by Anonymous01/17/17

WOW

I just came in my pants reading this story! Great job!

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by Anonymous01/19/17

I loved it, but yes did she get pregnant? she should have then you have to be together to fuck even more

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by Bak2DFuture01/26/17

In Cest

Real kool............I mean HOT!

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by Anonymous02/12/17

But did he ever get to work?

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