All Comments on 'Hi, My Name Is Hollie! Ch. 01'

I wonder if you'll make the sisters impregnate themselves or each other.

I was disturbed by how much I found this strangely facinating.

this is a very hot story so far keep the chapters cummin

I like this genre mashing story. Could have used a little more of a seduction sequence (why are these two having sex is an underrated way to determine how sexy a story is). but that's just a minor quibble. I have it a 5.

Good first start. Yeah, more around the scene, but this is promising.

too bad this is fiction- I would have loved to watch them self-suck, eating their own cum!

glad you have more to this story!