Taking My Daughter in the Car

What I want too

This is exactly what I have masturbated to every night since I felt my dad's hard cock. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

Hot story

Wow, i agree with Stacey, that was one hot story. Loved it and it certainly got me hard. Thanks.

Bleh

How the hell do these trolls think this was a hot story? There was nothing to it.

3 out of 5

I wished you had spend some time developing the daughter's character and not just describing her physical looks. It would definitely have added the taboo'ness to the story and made it hotter. Maybe how her innocent daughter have grown into this sexual confident creature, or talk about the development of their father/daughter relationship over the course of the years (increased in sexual tension, strained and distant, closer, flirtacious, whatever).

'little girls large breast'. girl's. Possesive not plural.

'smell her perfume, God it was such a turn on.' / 'I found myself instinctively getting hard.' Rather than just writing that it was a turn-on, it would be hotter to describe his reaction. How her her feminine scent was causing a masculine but unfatherly reaction in him, how he had to carefully readjust himself from his seat without stirring her awake as the growing tent in his pants was getting uncomfortable.

'her very large breasts together....my little girls large breasts....my well endowed daughter...'. You've already written how her breast has grown at the start, the adjectives are redundant and doesn't add anything to the hot'ness. If you want to make a point that she has big tits, try to do it indirectly. How the initials of her school's name is stretched out tightly across her top as she leaned against you, how her top looks like it was 2 size too small because of the way she fills it out, or how it felt as her breast was smushed against his arm.

'my daughter placed her hand over mine. Again, not thinking much of it, I returned the affection and took her hand into mine and we clasped our fingers together so that we were holding hands.' The paragraph felt out of place from the rest of the writing. You were writing a purely smut/erotica story and that paragraph belonged in a more romantic story (keywords affection, finger clasping, hand holding)

'noting how soft it was from the creamy lotion.... I noted as I reached her pelvic area....'. Less 'noting'. Just write how soft it felt, he didn't have to note it?
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'My caresses caused her to stir and moan softly... My caresses caused her to stir and moan softly' . Same as above, less 'caused' ?

'and spanked her ass as she...'. Wished you had described her reaction. Whether she whimpered 'it hurts, daddy', or how she started riding him harder.

I loved it

Best one yet

Zilch

This is not a story. And it's certainly NOT hot.

raw

it was raw...i loved it!

Clasic short story

Hey there are infinte amounts of taste and there is certainly people that likes this kind of story, in my case Im not fan of this type but even so I quite enjoyed this one.

Nice but to short

Stretch it out a little add more drama, more detail. I gave you 4 should have been 3 but keep trying. Oh, can I fuck your daughter? (LOL)

why 19 yrs old?

I think this story would be a lot hotter if the daughter was just a little younger, like 15 or 16 years old. Otherwise, I'm definitely wet :)

Re: Why 19?

If one or more of the participants in sexual activity was listed as under 18, then the story would not get posted on Literotica. That is part of the site's terms for story posting.

There are some stories where it is fairly obvious that they were rewritten to adjust ages of teens participating in sexual activity. You are probably welcome to make an adjustment back in your own mind when you read.

Damned hot story!

Needs a part 2!

You write nicely

I would add that she changer her mind and decides to stay near the house for college.
I also would have the wife go way for a week and what a week it could be wow.
keep up the good work,

very hot!!

You should make a part 2

OMG

Fuck Yeah

Not well thought out.

They are in the truck, she's fondling him through his pants. He pulls her on top and is inside of her? He must have been fucking her through his pants as neither one ever took it out.

She's a cheerleader for a community college? Can't say I ever heard of a community college with an athletic program, let alone having a cheerleading squad. If they exist at all, they are rarer than hen's teeth.

I really hate stories were the day-after pill is treated as standard birth control. It's for emergency contraception after another method has failed, not because the participants are too stupid to plan ahead. They have sex in the truck. She gets off, but he doesn't. He knows he's going to do her again that night and doesn't bother to buy some condoms? You can't say it was a decision made in the heat of passion. He had plenty of time to think about it beforehand.

The rest of the story covered no ground that we haven't read before in better written stories. It was rather clichéd, at best.

hmmmmm good pussy

you need to write sequel where he leaves mom and daughter moves in with him.


Ron Texas

Ch.2

Please oh please make a ch.2 I wanna see what happens next? Does the mom find out? Does the daughter and dad move in together? Please make ch 2 happen!!!

Please make more!!!!

It was really good. I hope you'll how she might get pregnant at a later time or the positions the have sex, or the mom founds pout and wants to join them in the fun. Thanks for a great read.

Sex with Father

Ahhhh... Lust makes my pussy wet...
I want a man to go and explore my inner body..
Could you be that man????

Sexxxxxxxx....

I would love this!

This story gets my hormones going, teenage cheerleaders (over 18) are a favorite of mine. Good for stroking!!!

Wet

This got my pussy so wet.

I am so horny now!!!

Awesome story that got me all wet and horny....sure hope there will be another story soon....

NICE

Sure got my Briefs a Nice white stain, Love these stories

Me too

I got a good look at my eldest daughter's cunt one day (she HAD to have let me see it on purpose) and I wanted to fuck her right then whilst she was lying on the couch. Two weeks later I did get into it when we were alone at home and we've been really close since. We haven't done anything again, but we've been close.

my baby girl

Two nights ago me and my 28 year-old daughter was drinking together at home and she ask me if I would want to do something I said what's that she is 120 pounds nice ass Tiny long brown hair she took my hand and went to my bedroom and shut the door and started kissing me and put her hand down my Pants and started rubbing my cock She said she has fantasized about having sex with me for 15 years she told me to lay down on the bed we got Naked and she started to suck my cock the we were doing a 69. Her pussy was so sweet then she turned around and grab my cock and put it in her she was so Tight and wet she said she was going to fuck me till I cum in her and wow did I ever cum in Her it was poring out of her we have been having sex two time a day every day Since then it's like we was made for one another

NO PLAN B

I told my daughter the same I would get her plan b if let me cum in her pussy, she said I could as long as I forget about trying killing any babies we make, we now have 3 kids, and my wife wants me to watch our other daughters closer so they do not become a slut like their sister..Little does she know I have planed on doing just that

very sexy

i would give anything to cum inside my 22 year old daughter

Nope

And nope again

You have to continue this. You have written a very good basis for a story that could be several chapters. Think about it!

So horny!

Aahh...my pussy is so wet right now...I want somebody to explode into me..Who would like to fuck me?Mmmm.. 💦🍆

Hi I am horny to and would love to come a take care of you..

So Horny

Love to fuck your wet cunt

I'm sooo wet, wish there was someone who would fuck me like this.

My pussy is so wet

Ugh I wish my punk past was getting pounded right now fuck I wanna cum

im cumming

Hi