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Identity Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/13/12

Loved...

This storys' start, continue soon. Definitely hooked me.

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by Queen_Vicki12/15/12

good

what a good start you have here,darling.

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by Kittybaloo12/15/12

More more!!!
Loved this, very dark & mysterious.

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by cantfightfate12/16/12

Good start but

how are you going to fit the nonhuman aspect in here? Is it even necessary to the story? I love were stories but your storyline is already complex without the supernatural element. I'm definitely interested in reading more, but I hope you don't spoil it by over-complicating.

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by emidoza01/26/13

more

Just read a second time. Please write more.

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by Decadentdessert04/02/13

My comment is directed to the individual with concerns that the story was leaning towards supernatural. It is her story to tell, if the story did make that turn you would still be here reading.Just because someome utter the word "Mine" dose not make them a ware. Love the story just discover it. Hopefully you will update soon?

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by Anonymous08/12/13

hurry

i cant wait for a new chapter

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