Rachel and Laura Ch. 02

Much better than the ratings indicate

This is a story about a woman who is in love with another woman -- but attracted to a man. His approach leaves a good bit to be desired, but his heart really seems to be in the right place and he really is attracted to her. I can't tell yet what will happen with Rachel and Laura ... I hope it doesn't break a lot of hearts. Rachel, for whatever reason, seems to be genuinely attracted to Ron as well. I don't know enough about Laura yet to figure out how she wants her relationship with Rachel to go. Laura doesn't seem to treat Rachel particularly well (I guess Rachel is the passive partner in the relationship and doesn't mind). I would hate for Rachel to be in love with two people who are incompatible in every way. More please!

Good...

I can see the confusion Rachel's feeling. From what she said about not having to worry if ppl judge her I think that's why Rachel gave Ron a chance. He seems like a good guy but I'd rather see Laura and Rachel together at the end.

I loved this so much.. Hope to see more of feelings from rachel to laura coz laura (in her chapters) had so much deepl feelings for rachel wich amazed me and she never once gave up on letting Ron take her rachel.. Well done this story just goes better n better..

amazing as usual..

I love that you started writting rachel's chapters after stopping laura's chapters at a moment wich made me hold my breath..its like I'm watching a movie.. Very great.. I'm really curious and hardly waiting to see what was the reason rachel didn't say no to Ron for his proposal.. What is she hidding to do this mistake?? Really can't wait for more chapters..