All Comments on 'Perfection in the World of the Dead Ch. 02'

I have to admit, I'm not enjoying at all that rape scene and what else is to come with it. It really puts me off, you had a great story going here with the first chapter and the begging of the second. I don't suggest involving anymore rape and things alike.

fantasy world is a bit grim for me. How do you suppose this lovely couple goes through life after such encounter with their savers? Why would anyone save someone , only moments later to torture, rape, sodomize etc?? Wouldn't one create a life long mortal enemy??? Or maybee that person( the leader I suppose), just a little misunderstood? Generally, I like the way you write,very much.