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All Comments on 'The Familiar Ch. 00'

by blackfire13

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EpixrysonEpixrysonover 11 years ago
This should have been a poem..

..since it didn't make any sence, but had something magical about it .

Or maybe it was only me that failed to understand your story.

Either way ,five stars for the 'magic'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Too much purple prose = WTF.

WTF just happened?

Who's perspectives were we witnessing this from?

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