All Comments on 'After Life Ch. 01'

Not the most original theme here, but well done none the less. The female showing up was not a surprise, but it is an erotic story site and masturbation does get a bit limited. The zombies are a tiny bit cliche right now, but not unexpected once they danced into the story and idiotic bikers were a bit of a relief. All in all a good effort and wanting to read more about these characters.

The writing wasn't bad for the description pieces, genreal mood and the setting establishment. The character dialogue was a bit on the campy side but that will improve with more practice. A really solid first effort. I look forward to reading (hopefully much) more.

Indeed, a zombie story is not one of the most original themes on this website, but you have quite the potential to turn it into a masterpiece. Keep working on the series and don't give up ! I have a new favorite writer :)

Cant wait to see where this story goes. Looking forward to chapter 2

I really enjoyed After Life Ch. 1 when I first read it. I hope you will continue it; I check in for updates on a fairly regular basis.

A bit unrealistic, perhaps.... a teen ager who knows swordplay that well? But it's a good start. I'll be interested to see where you take this.

I think an explanation of the main characters martial arts skills is probably called for but other than that it's a good start..

But... Double katanas? Sounds more like an Anime or light novel. I wish he would be a little suspicious and not jump to save someone so easily. Other than that, not a bad start. Looking forward for the next chapter.