All Comments on 'The Deal'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Interesting

I liked the simultaneous telling of the fantasies. The story started out a little slow but the ending was really nice. Make it more raunchy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
cant wait

to read that out come

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