All Comments on 'Morning Passion'

Could have been a reasonable story - until you tried to make out that "I" - the Reader - had been a participant!

Since I know that "I" was NOT a participant every possibility of believability was chucked out the window.

Result?

A 'story' not even worthy of a single Star!

It was to short. I would've liked to read more of this descriptive and well written story.

I though it was great. Don't worry about the length, sometimes I don't want to read a novel and just want something quick. Thanks!