i liked it, but one thing was there which i didnt really appreciate.
ok the women where all domm like and everything but theres a physical limit to every body and every cock and they were pretty pretty harsh with him since it was his first time in reality he would have been broken in this scene quite some time ago and would have been a sobbing mess.
not bad but not that realistic either
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good one but..
i liked it, but one thing was there which i didnt really appreciate.
ok the women where all domm like and everything but theres a physical limit to every body and every cock and they were pretty pretty harsh with him since it was his first time in reality he would have been broken in this scene quite some time ago and would have been a sobbing mess.
not bad but not that realistic either
Question
I get what you're saying about what doesn't ring true to some degree. So what would you change in this encounter?
thanks
for picking up on my critics i'll write you later on via the feedback
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