All Comments on 'Night with the Nanny'
by bedtimewords
- 9 Comments
Pirate Tregareover 11 years agoNot only well-written for plot, but also very few errors (some first attempts are so atrociously error-filled as to be painful to read). The fresh concept is a scenario that has more than a passing semblance of plausibility. Please continue!
wrecktechover 11 years agoHaving worked in an office where remote connectivity is possible I've see where the cursor starts moving, windows open and close and you think the machine is possessed (more than usual anyway). Another possibility to consider besides typing something back is a webcam.
tghlawyer03over 11 years agoHow nicely you have told your story for a first attempt at writing. I think you have what it takes to make a really good writer: a command of the language, an understanding of the uses of punctuation; a flare for a well turned phrase; and a cogent plan. Please give us more and I will look forward to a continuation of this nice vignette or a second peek into that naughty imagination of yours...nicely told indeed..
captmovieover 11 years agoPlease continue the story. I want to know what happenes when he returns home.
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