All Comments on 'Broken'

cool im interested ....keep going

I'm ready to read the next chapter.

I like this story. Keep going.

Good start. I'm hooked.

Intriguing cant wait to find out more

a very interesting and intriguing start to a story ... looking forward to more :-)

I'll look for new chapters of this. So far it seems good. I hope you'll continue in the same direction.

Don't wait long between chapters. Stories that tie disparate threads together need to be told with haste to maintain reader interest. Good stuff so far.

Please continue this soon!!!!!!!!

Hope to see a new chapter soon.

Another unfinished story