All Comments on 'Builders Slut Ch. 03'

Very hot, keep up the good work

Kristy will be a good influence on the main character as she will fill the role of Mistress to her new sub

Very hot, and told so well. Looking forward to more of her submission to Kirsty. Thanks for sharing your wonderfully dirty imagination!

Great story,Great twists,Love the way Kirsty has sprung into it & fits in perfectly :) Also perfect ending to the the chapters leaving you intrigued to find out what will happen nxt. Hmmm.

I have fallen in love with the Kirsty character. I now must read more. Clever writing indeed.

The characters are developing well, leaving room for some very juicy future scenarios :)

love this series.

"The emotions in me at this point were too complex for my basic writing skills to explain adequately." Well Natalie, let me tell you your writing skills made me perfectly clear what your emotions were then. Maybe because I read more stories, maybe because I know you a little, but I could almost feel the emotions myself.

Loved the addition of a female to the mix, very erotic