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Fascinating Story
Not being much on SciFi/Fantasy in this venue [Literotica], I started this not expecting to much care for it.
I was very pleasantly surprised. Once into it a ways, I could not walk away until I got to the end.
Very enjoyable read. Well written and quite imaginative. Good story flow and well thought out from the technical perspective I thought.
You brought the lives of two disparate people, Angelo and Dr. Durkin, together quite nicely. Despite the rather unpleasant ending for Angelo, somehow I got the feeling that he was happier dying with his new implanted memories than with the real ones.
You seem to have a thing for happy endings and I sense this was a subtly staged means of giving Angelo that happy ending.
The ending did explain one mystery and that was Angela's disappearance at age 47 with no traces. That there were no records of her death even in news accounts does seem a bit of a stretch but then, it is a Fantasy/SciFi entry! ;-)
I was at a total loss for words.
Again this was a story I was hesitant to read due to lack of interest in the subject matter. I carefully read DeepBlueC's comment and concur with his well thought out and expertly phrased comment and will just tip my hat to his mastery of the pen. Thank you SusanJillParker for this story and thank you DeepBlueC for expressing my sentiments so much better than I could have.
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