All Comments on 'Tied'

I'm glad you decided to write for us - and this introductory story pushed all the right buttons! Thank you - five stars, welcome and have a great Christmas.

"I can tell he has planes". You need to check the spelling and for the correct word usage. Plans and planes are very different. Many mistakes, but a good story.

Loved this story. The only thing missing were some nipple clamps. I've saved this story in my favorites for hubby to read and get inspired.

This story would benefit from some spell-checking and revising. Need to correct things like "he had planes," "He grabs my ankle and Riggs it down," "Again he lands Ruhr on the plug,"

Feels like this is a first draft and a rough draft, at that.