ever heard of exclamation marks to see when somebody is talking?
please use them otherwise this is just a really bad read
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Anonymous03/13/13
I think not.
You should have either thrown the bag in the trash or handed it back to her the next day. He was "suddenly submissive"? Don't think so. Would have had to know more before getting into that situation with a strange woman. Just say no.
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Anonymous11/25/13
Really?
He wanted to stay with the bitch? Given the personality you gave him, I just don't see that happening. Too implausible. And get an editor.
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whoa dude
ever heard of exclamation marks to see when somebody is talking?
please use them otherwise this is just a really bad read
I think not.
You should have either thrown the bag in the trash or handed it back to her the next day. He was "suddenly submissive"? Don't think so. Would have had to know more before getting into that situation with a strange woman. Just say no.
Really?
He wanted to stay with the bitch? Given the personality you gave him, I just don't see that happening. Too implausible. And get an editor.
needs quotation marks
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