All Comments on 'After the Bar'

That turned me on and left me breathless wanting more and more. Loved the build up, the pace of the story. Loved the description of the love making - it was as if I was there with you.....mmmmmm.

Think I can become a fan of your writing. Now I'm off to change my panties!!!

BKJenx

Always appreciate comments. :)

My stories are excerpts from my books. Was curious if I was good enough, so I cut the sex scenes out just to see if they were hot enough and whether men (or women) would respond. I write primarily for straight men, check out my profile and PM if you like. Thanks again

This was great. Not too long, very descriptive but in the right way and had the desired effect I was looking for ;)

Nice one!