Bag Lady & the Retired Marine Ch. 06

Wow! Very thoughtful. You are a treasure Susan,

very good

Susan . This story is getting better and better can't wait for the next chapter.

Great

I'm really into this story. I hope it continues quickly.

Fascinating Pair

It's interesting watching the way these two similar yet very different people interact and the relationship between them forms and develops.

I get the sense that Dave wants this relationship to become a serious one but is also afraid of that having all his life had entirely different male-female relationships.

Susan on the other hand doesn't seem to be looking for or wanting such a relationship but isn't as hostile to it as the mildly hostile front she presents suggests.

I'm anxiously awaiting the continuing saga of the Retired Marine and the Bag Lady.

It's not all sex

Susan, the mark of a superior writer is to make your readers lose themselves in the characters and story. You do that every time you touch a computer key. Your stories have meat to them, not just juicy, sweet sex -- although there is plenty of that too. Please keep at it. You are incredible.

Good stuff

Can't wait to read more, talk about a odd couple

You go girl!

The poor bastard hasn't got a chance...lucky him.

great stuff

Susan your stories are getting better and better. Imaginative, clever and humorous. You make the mundane overlooked parts of life interesting. Your stories can be real gems. So happy holidays ( oh so politically correct I am)...

You Are Good*****

Thanks for sharing.

better read the second time