Keep it coming and keep up the good work. I've been with you from the beginning and will be here to the end
One more fantastic read. Thank You. Will be pasently waiting for the next chapter. Marry Christmass. tll some were in the Black Hill of S.D.
Next chapter quick please!
So glad to see the new posting! I came to the party late and just caught up with all of the stories. Keep it coming, I love them all. BUT, I have to say that I have always found Annie/Anakatrine to be aggravating. She's portrayed as being so wise yet I feel like everything is one sided with her. Her side. She has been angry with Caleb for keeping secrets from her, but she does the same with him. She doesn't like being "bossed" around by Caleb or Rafe and yet she's done that to them many times. I know she is supposed to be a "Queen" but her holier than thou thing is grating to me. AND I can't help but think that Caleb is correct here. I think she has set them up for being assassinated again and he has been trying desperately to avoid that. She's too hung up on herself. And she's really not very considerate of other's feelings. I just remember when she first reunited with Gard that she felt his deep lonliness and yet she made him continue to hide in the shadows for another 5 years because she was supposedly oh so concerned about Rafe's reaction. And then when Rayne was so upset about finding out Gard had left her as a child and he tried to console her, Annie tells him to leave, even though he asked her not to ask it of him. Yes, it worked out ok with Gard and Rayne (who I love by the way) but I didn't see her doing anything to help console Rayne or her brother whose sole purpose in life up until then has been to protect her. And so what if Caleb is concerned about Callain taking over him completely? Their rule didn't work out so well the first time, probably because she didn't listen to his input anymore than she does now. Caleb seems to be trying to learn from the past while Annie seems to be doomed to repeat it. (Of course I don't know the full backstory yet, but I hope that Caleb isn't made out to be the bad guy here. He's not perfect, but then neither is Annie.)
Thank you for the lovely Christmas present. Love, love, love this story, but I agree with the earlier Anonymous poster regarding not really liking Annie very much. I too have always found her not very likable. I guess that I kinda felt that way when she kept smacking Demetri (who I ADORE). She seems to think that her opinion is the only one that counts and constantly feels that only she knows the right thing to do. Maybe this experience will humble her a little.
Loved this chapter, only one complaint..MORE DEMETRI, please, please, please.
Crying is exactly what I wanted to be doing at four in the morning... Wonderful beginning J
Your faithful follower T :)
How often do people sabotage their love just because they can't get past their own fear and pride.
Thanks for the early present... I think I have an unnatural obsession with Demetri.lol.
I started reading these two years ago and I must say I never thought in a million years that they'd become so HUGE! I must agree with the other readers, Annie is selfish. I've always found her so irritating and could never see her wisdom. She has everyone wrapped around her little finger and it's time that she didn't get her way. I hope to see more of Kothari in the story. I'm absolutely in love with him! I also hope Liam grows some balls and learns how to control his power. Okay, that's enough rambling from me. Awesome story, I can't wait to see how it turns out!
So nice to see you have returned to us with this christmas present!.. Following you on facebook made the wait more bearable!
I'm so glad you've finally posted a new chapter! I loved this, but as as always you leave me wanting more.....
Love it glad to here more. But u r evil to leave us like this. Thanks for the update. Merry Christmas.
Caleb babe if you need a shoulder to lean on or nibble on I am available dump whats..her..name and come home sweety, I'll make you feel better. Sigh.
the start of another rollercoaster ride. i'm not sure if annie is right always letting anakatrine get the upper hand when things get "rough" she's a strong person in her own rights, being with caleb is proof of that. but on the other hand to agree with gard that caleb has to confront callain at some point and not just push him back, he on the other hand would be surprised that in his case callain doesn't want the upper hand, he just wants to be aknowledged, touch base with his own anna.
to add to that these are both long standing characters and i hope their "side" story won't start overshadowing the main story here because it is quite an opening.
It did not disappoint.WOW! Maybe Elijah survived and is in Europe,hmmm.Excellent chapter.
I have no words. Just excited!! Merry Christmas!!
Merry Christmas to me! That was a perfect surprise present to make me stop all my holiday madhouse and sit down to enjoy! God, I love reading your writings. There are not many stories where I can imagine myself as one of the characters but I can in your writings. Another amazing piece of work!!!
However - be in no doubt whatsoever that the depth of demonic destruction, mayhem, plague and pestilence that will be unleashed if there is ANY delay in posting new chapters will be terrible to behold - thanking you in anticipation, yours respectfully, bachgenbachdrwg. AND I disagree with the critcism of Annie/Rhianna/Annakatrine - she has ALL their safety and needs to consider and that requires objectivity not emotion. She can seek comfort and solace with one very satisfied customer on this side of the pond anytime.
Jazzy-pooh.....you are the best!!! There so many factors going on that I can't wait to see how all this works out. Once again you never fail to impress me. I hope you have a wonderful holiday and great New Year. Love always.
I don't know how to adequately type squeal of delight so I'll just say i am so dang happy you're back!!
This is a very busy time of year. Thank you for taking the time to post this chapter. I love reading your works. May you have a wonderful holiday season!
Liked this one a lot, can't wait for the next chapter. Glad you are back with more.
I've got chills girl. As usual you blow me away!! I can't wait for more though so hurry please!!!!💙
It's great to have you back. A nice Christmas bonus another story from a great author. With all your stories from the first chapter I get hooked. Now I'll gave to wait for the next several installments to see if Caleb can merge with Callain and make-up with Annie
you've done it again jaz :), im so emotionally invested in your work its not funny.. anxiously awaiting the next chapter...
thank you thank you....this is starting out awesome
A lot of your stories with this group has been filled with suspense, comedy, romance and the ability to show that love conquers all.
This story will test the root of what true love is, and show how all affected will overcome such a huge obstacle. So in the words of Monty Python..
YES!! GET ON WITH IT!!!
Thank you for the great Christmas gift--a JazCullen cliff hanger woohoo and away we go!!! :-)
I am mad cos i didnt get to hear anything from lily or mac and i am also happy that yu came out with this chapter, which bring me back to mad cos yu ended in a cliff hangerD:< i still love yu tho:)
why must you torture your faithful readers so?
As always, the chapter was stellar, if annoyingly short. Looking forward to the next installment.
All I can say is WOW! I'm biting my nails to see what happens next. Great job again!!
Have a Merry Christmas! and a inspiring New Year!
Waited so long for this chapter thank u for writing it now if only u could have made it longer. Seriously the suspence is slowly killin mii. Such emotions in ur writing I cnt wait for the rest
You're back! Best Christmas present!
Jaz, I haven't even read this chapter yet, but I had to come and write and tell you how happy seeing this made me!!! yayyyy!!!!!! ok now to read
But ...but....need MORE!!! Love, love the inside of your head and can't wait to see where this is going cos you always surprise me xx
Even though this chapter was hard to read and i went through a few tissues it was a wonderful chapter and i was absolutely DELIGHTED to see this up, can't wait to read more hun, keep up the awesome work!!!
first off, i wanna say thank you before anything else...thank you for writing again and continuing this saga...i may have had issues with mac and lily's story but i am still with you on this world you have created...
now onto this chapter...without sounding too whiny, this would've been better attached as the last chapter of HoW...it may not have been as dramatic but still a WTF??!?! kind of cliffhanger and will be a good introduction to the next story...that being said, you're the author, so your plan goes...i look forward to this new story of this ongoing saga...please don't stop writing abt this world...there's still sooo many characters needing to have their story told :)
Oh, I just want to slap Caleb upside his stupid fat head! How can someone so smart be so dumb! I really hope he pulls himself together soon!
Caleb needs to sort himself out but he seems to have his heart in the right place. Lets hope he can resolve his issues with Annie/anakatrine quickly.
I have yet to read the new chapter. I will wait until at least chapter two.. However, that be said, you are loved by so many (including me). I am so glad you are continuing the series. You must be the most popular non human writer on Lit. Is that an oxymoron or an alliteration? Anyway welcome back, from across the Pond!
Caleb's edict protected the were's, but his pride and not willing to bend amplified what Reasa did 10 fold and blew up in his face. Great story and i would loved to see Demetri crack Caleb's jaw just once!
Merry Christmas to me!!
I am strapped in and ready for this new ride!
Your such a tease, you give us the chapter we are all asking for only to leave us with a short seen of everything being ripped apart. Now I'm stuck waiting for all the other chapters to come and wondering when Caleb is going to stop being such a over bearing idiot at time and fix this. And Oh how I wonder who the three are that need healing. So many little stories within the big one I don't know which one I want to hear more about in the next chapter. You make it very hard Jaz to pick by making me love all your characters. Great job like always, looking forward to reading this next section to the amazing saga so far. :)
It is about time you got back to the main two characters that set this whirlwind of a series on fire. For too long, Caleb and Annie have been hanging in the shadows... it is their turn to come back into the light again. I have read every one of your stories on here and love every one of them. They have even given me the inspiration to try to write my own story. As soon as I get a chapter of my story written, I want to send you a message inviting you to read what you inspired me to write.
Was so disappointed when you ended the story but now that you are back with the new chapter, i am overjoyed.
I hate to see Annie and Caleb at odds, however I am over the moon to have my two favorite characters right back into the center of the spotlight. I love this entire series built on their love and family♥ I can not wait to see where it goes
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