All Comments on 'Jenna Gets Taken'

by jennahale

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Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
Very nice, Jenna.

Well constructed and well paced; a tried and true theme, well handled, especially for a first timer.

AzaliaAzaliaover 11 years ago
I just want to know one thing...

Was 'the man' Josh? XD

ForsakenliteroticaForsakenliteroticaover 11 years ago
Good

I thought this was very well done.

Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Do you think you are being creative? Half the stories on here end like that! I liked it until the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It's good but the ending wasn't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I loved the ending!

It makes a potentially abusive story positive, and one in which anyone could proudly engage.

TeniTeniabout 11 years ago

I actually liked the surprise change at the end. I know a lot of people didn't.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot

Hot story, you have a wicked mind, I like it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

It was hot because it was a fantasy. It's porn, come on, it's all fantasy. The ending was good because it acknowledged it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Audio

Any chance of this being an audio story too? Your current audio story is pretty hawt.

jennahalejennahaleabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Thank you everyone for the feedback, I'll take everything into consideration when writing my next one (I'll even listen to you Mr. Anonymous - Thanks for your negative feedback on my non-creativity). And yes, I'm thinking about making this into a audio submission for those of you who were wondering :)

1sexystoryatatime1sexystoryatatimeabout 11 years ago
Well done yet still classy

Just read this story after listening to your recorded one. I personally think raping a woman or screwing a farm animal is repugnant. But, to each their own. I liked the fantasy element much more than an actual rape, so ignore the guys who hated on you. They have plenty of stories to keep them busy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Too much aggressiveness

What's wrong with " Quiet and you won't get hurt." , instead of " Shut up, slut ! " ?

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