by Tara Cox
please continue. would really love to see this story continue. lot of unanswered questions you could deal with. hopefully you would choose to end with them together even if the journey was rocky.
WHAT IF...is next and wil the WAS become an again, TK U MLJ LV NV
mind don't you, this story can only go one way but yet you leave us this tiny little doubt that maybe she will....... nahhhhhh.
Two talons up from the Eagle
love it Tara
Fine writing of a disturbing story. For those wanting more, the title says it all: what might have been. No Hollywood film fantasy reunion, just memories of a brief encounter which, ultimately, affected and changed the lives of many. And the professor can never know the truth.
Leave 'em guessing! Well done. The professor is no less manipulative now than he was then. She doesn't need him. He needs to grow up.
Wow! A complete story in two pages. It could have been longer or continued for a different ending, but that may not have made it any better.
Yet another unfinished story from this author -- I think I will move on to other authors who can write a complete story, not just a preview. One star.
Also, what kind of woman doesn't even tell a man he has a child, even after he indicates a continuing interest in her as a person, not just a sex object.
Anonymousover 1 year ago
Another unfinished story
Yet another unfinished story from this author -- I think I will move on to other authors who can write a complete story, not just a preview. One star.
Also, what kind of woman doesn't even tell a man he has a child, even after he indicates a continuing interest in her as a person, not just a sex object.'''' I second this !!
"Three-thousand four-hundred and fifty dollars would virtually clear out the joint account"
Without her husband's signature?