All Comments on 'Might Have Been'

by Tara Cox

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more please

please continue. would really love to see this story continue. lot of unanswered questions you could deal with. hopefully you would choose to end with them together even if the journey was rocky.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
MIGHT HAVE BEEN.....IS WAS

WHAT IF...is next and wil the WAS become an again, TK U MLJ LV NV

blackwatereagleblackwatereagleover 11 years ago
You have a devious....

mind don't you, this story can only go one way but yet you leave us this tiny little doubt that maybe she will....... nahhhhhh.

Two talons up from the Eagle

love it Tara

fefe428fefe428over 11 years ago
Wow!!!

Quite a beginning....I hope there is more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
so good

You have left me wanting. Great story! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Another great beginning...

More please!

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
There is no more

Fine writing of a disturbing story. For those wanting more, the title says it all: what might have been. No Hollywood film fantasy reunion, just memories of a brief encounter which, ultimately, affected and changed the lives of many. And the professor can never know the truth.

AndrewmsailingAndrewmsailingalmost 8 years ago
I love the ending.

Leave 'em guessing! Well done. The professor is no less manipulative now than he was then. She doesn't need him. He needs to grow up.

Bobcat13Bobcat13over 4 years ago
Bittersweet

Wow! A complete story in two pages. It could have been longer or continued for a different ending, but that may not have made it any better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another unfinished story

Yet another unfinished story from this author -- I think I will move on to other authors who can write a complete story, not just a preview. One star.

Also, what kind of woman doesn't even tell a man he has a child, even after he indicates a continuing interest in her as a person, not just a sex object.

fishgetterfishgetteralmost 3 years ago

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Another unfinished story

Yet another unfinished story from this author -- I think I will move on to other authors who can write a complete story, not just a preview. One star.

Also, what kind of woman doesn't even tell a man he has a child, even after he indicates a continuing interest in her as a person, not just a sex object.'''' I second this !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"Three-thousand four-hundred and fifty dollars would virtually clear out the joint account"

Without her husband's signature?

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