Uncertain Justice

Anonymous

Excellent doesn't begin to describe this story. You should get a publisher and an agent to negotiate the movie rights. Please don't use Nicolas Cage, Tom Cruise or anyone else like them as Miles. Get Mark Wahlberg or someone similar.

Like any really good work of art, you look silly pointing it out to others.

So I'll just say, thank you for your good work.

Thank You.

Absolutely magnificent!

The heading says it all.

Great story

Louis Lamore and Tom Clancey write a long tale together. Great, best of both. Get an agent and publish this.

BRILLIANT

totally excellent story , I agree with all the other comments , I would definitely buy the book

Whew!

Great!!

A nice read , if unrealistic.

When miles broke into the prosecutors home I was screaming at him to send the files to his lawyer via fax machine. I later realized it was all a set up for a ruby ridge fantasy where the lone man takes on the whole gubmint and wins .

Too long winded..

Longhorn, with his verbosity and love of dramatizing a simple daily activity of his protagonist - like walking, opening doors or stopping for a smoke - has magnified the flaws in his story writing. 
One is of a technical nature (A hand gun, unless its trigger jammed on first shot, does not accidentally go off a few rounds; intense heat does not necessarily cause unspent ammunition to shoot out - explode most likely - but not shoot like a bullet). The other being lack of concern for reading comfort. Very often this reader had to pause and recall where he was left off at the last scene or episode, thus causing breaks in the flow of an otherwise smooth narrative. This happened too often  to disrupt the flow of connecting scenes. I stopped reading at page 8 when I realized that those remaining 47 pages could consist of more of such padded verbosity and story-go-round.

This is a long story but worth the wait. As a couple of readers pointed out, he could have shortened it without damage but chose not to. This is a story people and not all fiction, Ruby Ridge anyone? or the Dallas murder? We tend to forget these old stories, and there are others. The ATF & CIA, ask our special forces, are basically gangs with a license.
This is a wonderful story the only defect I see is that he could have made chapters longer.

Outstanding!!!!!

I think this story was well thought out! A lot of research and time went into this one. The best read I've had in a long time! I look forward to reading more of your stories!!!!!

They would never let anyone

get away with that ... but .. what a tale,what a story ! Hell ya ! I loved it as silly as it was

Wow this was long - But worth every page

Did not realise at the beginning how long the work was. By the time I realised that this was no short story I was hooked. A cracking good read and if there were any criticism it finished to quickly at the end. Well worth more than five stars.

Ups and downs in this story

This rather interesting story goes into almost too much detail the end result it is a long story and I am certain if it was a printed book it might be as much as 200 pages in length. It is not a short story. It is a non-erotic novel, a very good one and entreating to read.

Read 55 pages

So you had me hooked. Good work. 5 stars.

Well worth time to read

This story was well worth the time reading. Calling this a story is a real understatement - novella or book. I really enjoyed reading not sure why it took me so to long to get to it. I can only assume the length through me off the first time I saw this story? It was definitely not the quality of writing or the writer. I have enjoyed all of Longhorn__07 writings. Since there has not been any new stories I can assume, partly based on this story, that Longhorn__07 has joined several other Lit writers (three I know for sure) is now publishing (e-publishing) and making a little money with writing! Always nice if you are "good enough" to make money on a hobby/activity you enjoy. Longhorn__07 is definitely good enough a writer and storyteller. Thank you for sharing, I really appreciate your writing. Let us know if you are ePublishing I would be interested! I do hope you are still writing. Your story/stories are diamonds and gold among so much dirt and crap on this site!!!
It always make it an extra pleasure to find those stories.

What a fantastic story

This is my second read of this fantastic tale of endurance and retaliation against corrupt officialdom. The author is too good for Literotica so we are privileged to have him post his stories here. I hope everyone enjoyed this as much I did.

Poor Pepper

I read this enjoyable and exciting story until I came to the exremely vivid death of the hunting dog. Usually detail is something I really appreciate in an author, but that amount of cruelty just stopped me cold.

There should be a disclaimer at the beginning of this story. Please add this to save future readers from the same fate.

This is a page turner

My wife was feeling neglected by the time I completed the story.

Thanks, this one is a movie waiting to happen

I read it all the way through and enjoyed the story too much to notice anything to criticize. What a tale! I appreciate the time and effort you put into this one. Thanks again... what a path you led me down. Scotty

I want the movie

This has Oscar written all over it! It would make a great movie!!

very much enjoyed

8 hours to read
and am sure it will stay in my mind for many days to come
Echoes of "The Fugitive" "Hunted" "Rambo" and a few other tales
However that does not in anyway detract from the immense enjoyment i got from reading this story.

Louis L'Amour

Very good! Reminded me, in part, of Mr. L'Amour's book, "Last of the Breed"

Awesome read

Great job nate was absolutely awesome

very fine reading

I second the commentators who recommend turning making this into a movie. One criticism: the ending read as though it had been rushed thriugh.

uncertain justice

theis is an excellent story...i have read it 3 times and will probably do so agaain..thank you so much for your efforts and abilities...paul crabtree

Hated it. Too long.

Wow. One of the best stories anywhere, anytime...

I didn't read this when it came out due to the length. Forgot about it and then saw it again. Wow! Absolutely riveting. Too bad there wasn't one law enforcement agency with a brain - sadly that is our situation many years after this story was published. I loved the interaction with The People and Zeb. And of course Linda finally caught her man! I think this story could be cleaned up a bit and published.

epic

Never expected to find a story like this on here.
It drew me in and I had to stay with it to the end.
Well worth 5*

best story he has written

This is the best story that the writer has produced. It deserves more than 5 *
I forget how many times I have read this story, but every time I read it I am amazed once more how great it is. Everything he writes from now on will be judged against this one.

hell yeah

one hell of a story. thank you for writing it.
i believe anonymous bashers should grow some balls and reveal themselves or shut the hell up!

this is amazing

I
was concerned about the length, but that disappeared quickly. It just took me right into the action for the entire ride.

Outstanding!

Superbly well constructed and attention retaining from the first paragraph. The characters were nicely developed and remained consistent within their story line.
It may not have been what most of us think of when we think "Literotica", but while it wasn't "erotica", it definitely was "literary". I concur with gatorhermit in that it should be re-edited, cleaned up, expanded slightly and published. This is a mature piece of fiction that deserves a wider audience.

Sensational

You my friend are a heck of a story teller. This was probably the most sensational story I have read here till date. Hope you write lots more. Outstanding work.

This is . . .

This, is the longest story I've seen on literotica (and the best) there was almost no mistakes in grammar, spelling or syntax. In addition the good guy did win, got the girl, and what better thing than the villain loses his mind and winds up as a (preserved) drooling idiot. I gave the story 5*s only because there is nothing better to give !!!

Get an agent and publish!

Wow. Write more and publish.

faggot

Fucking lame shit! Stick to your shit!

Amazing story.

This is one of, if not the best story I've read to date on this site.
You are an amazing story teller and I applaud your work.

5*

5+

Epic...Best Story on site...Publish it...!!!

Longest...

Longest story I've ever seen on lit. Enjoyed it except for the sudden change in Brady losing it at the end; seems too easy an ending for him. Overall though, a great story!

How did I miss this?

I have read and thoroughly enjoyed your stories on this site. Somehow, I failed to read this one, which has proved to be a real mistake. This is a true page-turner from beginning to end. It touched upon my own phobia with respect to the criminal justice system and my respect and admiration for our military (I served 20 years in the Army myself). I even enjoyed the Native American mysticism. Please continue to write; your work is quite special. 5 stars

Hell Of a Story

Longer than most here on Lit., but very good. I agree with someone else who said the ending with "Brady" was a little lame. The bastard really should have had to suffer for his transgressions. All in all, though, great story. 5 Stars, no doubt.

Roscoe Arbuckle comes to mind.

Fatty to us.

for openers...

... it's C class (World Level), for sure. Nobody fret.
After 10 days I' m only on "page", (each is really 5? pages of book.), 17; as of 23 Nov 16.
Was looking for... the obvious, got hooked.
Red comments after page 2, decided to wait, page 5 wait, page 12, read comment with spoiler, wait, 17 spoiler... decided to stop reading comments... which are rather good. I'll read, when fin, and ready to post... except.
Is this story too long? No.
Then again, I've read a trace less than a third... but it ain't a one pager, a 3, or 5, or... 17? - Ken

Who is this guy, a wimpy Clint Eastwood

I'm only half way through page 3 and this sorry excuse for a NCO is disgusting. He must be channeling Gunny Highway (and the characters wishing to be in touch with his feelings crap). Shit I cannot believe any Master Sergeant after 22years of Army bullshit wimping out like this. Not even the REMF pukes at E-8 would disgrace themselves to this extent. Since the mid 70s you had to have a 1SG slot open in order to finish being promoted to E-8. Very, very few would quake at this level of adversity.

This was my second read... And oddly enough...

I remembered reading the story and over the last month was having a craving to re-read it... Thing was, I couldn't for the life of me remember where I'd read it...

Then I was re-reading your stories and Bam! There it was...
Just as enjoyable as the first time...

Only negative for me was the poor doggy... But I did understand it in the context of the story... Just wish it'd been a mean dog instead of basically a big puppy...

Thanks for the Story

I spent a couple hours for a few days reading the story. Nice fantasy, good characters and great ending. Love when the good guy gets what he deserves.

MVP Performance

Superb all the way through. As many others have said, this story deserves a wider audience. 5 stars isn't enough...

Well done indeed

Amazing story. Was quite sad when I got to the end. I only have one question though. What happened to Brady?

Thanks

I would like to thank you for sharing the story Uncertain Justice , I enjoyed the story a lot. While it was a long read it was well worth the time spent , I found the plot and characters to be well thought out and very enjoyable also to be believable. Thanks again for sharing and please keep up the good work.
Thanks
RANDY T.

Thanks

Second read, and just as fabulous at the first time. Characters were wonderful and the story line was easy to follow and extremely well developed..Thanks for a great read!