Did You Really Mean It?

absolutely beautiful

I want you to know I read this and I cried. The right people got together after all. The ex-wife just flat out didn't care.

HE LOVED HER

He loved her she cheated with a worthless piece of crap.
Lori was was betrayed by him and her best friend.
Dan and Lori were ment to be together.
In my favorites. All is well all ends well.

Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!! Why!? Why must you end at the beginning of the best part!? I'm gonna lose it! Or have I already lost it? *resumes screaming*
-Anubelore ;)

just as good, if not better

than the first time I read it.

thanks

Just Beautiful!

But it needs an epilog where he takes her friends out to dinner to thank them for helping bring them back together!

CINCO ESTRELLAS

*****

Beautiful

My allergies kicked in right at the end, I swear.

@Anonymous 05/11/15

Only Thing Wrong in your story is when your ex went back to Tom after Christmas he should have beaten her to death! Then when he was sentenced to life in prison he could have been Bubba's and "Tiny's" bitch for life. I really like a tidy ending. ;)

great read

sorry but this should have been in the romance section.
not the loving wives
what that saying you. may have to kiss a frog to find your true love
it could of had little more to the ending or not.

last time it happened

to me I spent too much money on whiskey and after the dog died I was alone again. I'm still as angry as you are Scotty

Thank You!

An outstanding story!
Those e-mails from Dan,particularly the last one,were real tear-jerkers! ( In a profoundly happy way.)

Second time through...

still five stars.

hello

just magnificent

Would have appreciated learning why the wife was cheating.

What was the problem in her marriage that fucking around was going to solve? The romantic side story was too obvious and predictable to be very interesting. A nice story, but could have been much better with more drama and exploration of motives and personalities. If his wife was just a shallow selfish cruel lying whore, how could Dan not have noticed? Pretty hard to hide that depth of evil and selfishness. It oozes out, like stink from a pit toilet.

@Anonymous 04/30/15

MAYBE he had FEELINGS for Lori, but you KNOW he was FAR to honorable to act on them in ANY way, and certainly in no way to justify Julie’s cheating with her best friend’s HUSBAND!

Excellent Story

I checked your Bio and see you have a history High scoring stories. You must have the record for the highest percentage of hot stories. Keep up the good work.

Bravo!

Excellent story. The cheaters lose and the non-cheaters win. What more can you say. Thank you for another real good story.

Best Story Ever

This really was the best story I ever read. I don't know where to start. Sooo good. Thank you for writing it. I cryed. I'm a 60 year old truck driver...made me think a lot about life. Thanks again

Yep.

Good one.
Thanks,
MGM

Wow

Just love your stories.

Nice

Excellent that there was a happy ending. In the end the good people got together for a happily ever after. A great read every time.

Re-Reading

Just read for I don't know how man times, still had to fight through the tears at the end.

And anyone who has read some of my BTB comments know that I'm not all that soft-hearted!

YOU ARE A LITERARY GENIUS

When/if I ever become a writer, I wanna be like you. I almost never post comments when several comments have previously been posted. But wow and I mean wow, I just had to say something. Thank you sir for one of the best stories that I have ever read.

heydog52 said it all for me!

You write wonderful vignettes of human life and love. Thank you.

As Tony the Tiger says.

Grrreaaattt!

This is some top shelf stuff

Very nicely done, not over done, or under, but right on.

5+

Great story - you have great talent to tell a story with all of the emotions bleeding out through your story. Keep on writing!

Great story

I gave it five stars but I have some issues. The ending was extremely rushed . Also, what happened to the cheaters?? I can see that a sequel or epilogue would be nice. Thanks again for sharing your talent.

beautiful story

I know it is in LW but a tweak here a turn there and could be a romance story.t worked out good for Lori and Dan as for the other two she threw her marriage away for a piece of crap than he left town just not of his choice. The ex tried to talk with him and I think she wanted to try and dig herself out of the divorce but she was just to late and I think she really loved Dan. In my favorites.
Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

One of your better stories.

The ending was a bit disappointing and kept it from being a 5

It should not have been by email. So cold and impersonal. He should have made the fucking trip and made the speech then with a ring in his pocket to put on her at the end of it.

That would have made it a 5

Great. Story

In another universe they would be together, well her ex the prick and his oh so vane wife opened the door to that universe. I do think his wife loved him in her own way and he said the two times they saw each other she wanted to talk maybe just to tell him why she took up with the scum bag or maybe trying to find a way back in his life. There are to many unanswered questions my thinking there should be a sequel to the story letting it all out. Just my thinking on it.
Ron/ cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

ONE WORD....AWESOME!

Well done!

Very well written.

Enjoyed it eminently. Great plot and characters. AA

Perfect

Perfect in every way!!!!

Second reading

Enjoyed this fine story just as much as I did the first time I read it. It should be noted by other authors that it is possible to write excellent entertaining stories without reverting to explicit sex and with only lightly implied sex.

wow

I absolutely loved the story and the writing as usual is top shelf.

Hated the cheating and marriage destruction but loved the happy ending.

Great Ending

This a very good story! Loi's story was well covered in the beginning and we knew her husband was a low life. Dans wife being involved in cheating was a twist but, you could have dropped a hint.

Maybe you did "visit all the time out of town ".
During the confrontation the wife and her lover said they did the deed at Dans house. By that time it didn't really matter. What you wrote about the ladies taking care of one another is so true.

Your ending was very satisfying and the way Dan got Lorin to come back to him we could have seen coming.

I didn't care though the ending was still great. Five Stars *****

Why?

Why are women who have everything they could want in a marriage such dumb asses?

An answer to the previous comment

On LIT every woman is per definition a brainless,stupid adulterous creature who is only alive thanks to her obivous living and breathing vagina

Actually there are real women out there that act the same way,

as women in this story! They fall for these handsome sweet talking guys while the nice guys try to get dates with these women. Then once they marry these weasles, their husbands treat them like shit by cheating on them. You would thing that once these women divorce they would wise up and grab a nice guy but they don't so they marry another weasle and the cycle continues.

HOLLY UNDIES BATMAN

Fucken tastic story! I loved it! What can I say, well it is better than MILLS&BOONE ! Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us! See ya.

Why through everything away?

Why would she destroy a good marriage for a scumbag. She saw what he did to her best friend. That's all I have to say except it is a good story 5 stars