by Legman173
I have enjoyed all three of the Studying with Kelly stories. It is a great story line, and you do well with building erotic tension. My only criticism is that you really need to clean them up, there are many typos. Several places you referred to Stan as "Stand", and once, out of no where you called him Dean. All is all, good erotic story...it succeeded in arousing me. Looking forward to part 4, but do suggest you do some more indepth editing.
I jut want to say that I love this storyline with Kelly and Stan, but I'd love it more if they actually officially hook up when you finish it. That's all. I look forward to the next installment.
I hope you continue this seriesI I've enjoyed all of your writings so far.
Please have someone (preferably sober) read, edit and spell check BEFORE you post.
Even spell check would help, but worse is the grammar, and stupid word errors. Is it Stan, Stand, Dean, whatever ? Did Kelly or the teacher 'cum' in opening line ?
And it just gets worse!