I like how you have this story building up. I was so engrossed with the details and its shaping that I had was caught off guard that end was reached so soon. Don't keep us waiting for long. Like how you gave Ben some slight imperfection(s).
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Caught me looking at the plate
I like how you have this story building up. I was so engrossed with the details and its shaping that I had was caught off guard that end was reached so soon. Don't keep us waiting for long. Like how you gave Ben some slight imperfection(s).
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