by BogartsBoss
" Do you think I'm pretty ?" Let's be real. Any woman knows after spending more then a day with a man If he thinks she's a looker. Then the bit about self doubt due to breast size & boys not dating her. Now she wants to chastely sleep with couple after interrupting an imminent fuck.
To add to all of this, the author is blatantly trying to milk the suspense by switching from teaspoon to eye dropper to dole out story. I want both author and Sandy to grow up. One star for going juvenile.
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Did the author write this ridiculous submission ? He showed far more creativity in one word his screen name than in the entire mish mash of idiocy.
You just keep right on writing. . Non illegitimus corundum. I used to read a lot of Heinlein also. I probably read everything he wrote. I really likeS or loved all of his extended family stories.
There can never be too much love!
JimR
I loved the story. Thanks for sharing. You had me thinking where are the children with all the nude sunbathing and kissing going on.
I enjoyed so far. Physical maturity does not bring emotional maturity. Sandy never had a boy friend and thus must go through the learning cycle.
What does worry is the possibility that they may be arrested on various charges right here on the site....
Sometimes I think the whole world is a dream. Will we ever wake up?
I love your story - it is erotic and sensitive, and is doing justice to the subject of polyamory. You talk with a realism that suggests you've 'been there, done that.' I am both sympathetic to the subject, and I love to write about (see my stories). This is a "5" and you have a new fan. // Romantic1