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by demure101

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HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Nice Sonnet

I choose the people

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
SHOULD HAVE ASKED DORIS DAY

the sages do not have all knowledge only answers to questions, TK U MLJ LV NV

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 11 years ago

The first sentence sets the tone for colloquial, but "pretty pass" is an idiomatic expression that, I don't think, is very familiar to most, so the first line felt a little like trying to mix oil and water together, at least to me. That said, I love the second line. It prompted me to take it further to "toil and trouble."

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Today it can also be ....

The state , the media & commerce ?! Excellent --5 ed !

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Quite a mix in that cauldron of yours

but the points you make, although a little confused and obscure, are well made in the end. And the metre and rhythm are, as ever, perfect. M

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