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by Anonymous12/24/12

Crap

Who talks like that? Who writes like that? Please stop!

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by H.H.Morant12/24/12

Not a bad story line...

... voyeurism as an aphrodisiac. But two rapes - and each time a virgin who climaxes - ugh!!!!!

""Just wait a minute," snapped Jill. "I'm trying to decide. If I wasn't a virgin I think I'd make you rape me on principle, but as I am I suppose I'm just going to have to go along with you. I don't want to lose my virginity via rape."

I don't think I have ever read a more unlikely piece of dialog than that.

I gave the stories two stars because voyeurism as an aphrodisiac is common in cuckold stories where the husband can't get it up unless he watches (or at the very least hears a blow by blow account of) his wife being fucked by another man, but as a seduction tool - don't remember seeing that for a long time, if ever.

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