Shadow and Light Book 01

Nice retelling of the roswell story

Prelims

So, I haven't read your story yet. I just wanted to make this post early to give you my thanks for posting this as a complete book, as opposed to many, many other authors on this site who post their stories as chapters. It's always very frustrating to me when authors do that, becuase the reader is never really sure if the creator will continue to put time and effort into their works So once again, thank you.

Commence reading!

Wooow

Just read your whole and gotta say cant wait till the next installment is out i loved it funny thing is that i started to read it and when got to page 12 i was like how much more and saw 45 suprised the hell out of me

thx to all

thank you all for the interest you have given my book its very humbling and the next installment should be in by march of this year and for those of you who want to help my writing career and get this book in a very tecnological marvelaka ebook form plz find me on bookrix sorrowdays27 and help my writing career and thanks for the interst havist cjar haviss may your swords stay sharp ;)

amazing

Amazing story, could use an editor tho, few spelling mistakes and areas where i had to re read to understand. But i cant wait for book 2!!!

Great Read

I loved your story and cant wait to read the next part.

Impressive with a small 'but'

First of all - thank you for posting this really long story, I'm sure it was a lot of work. Unfortunately part of the story stucture was quite unclear and confusing. It would have helped to just highlight the location information and mayby not have as many changes of place...
I noticed right away that you borrowed your main characters and background from the TV series Roswell, but I would have liked for you to mention this in the beginning to give the creators some credit or mark it as fanfiction.
Nevertheless, I'm deeply impressed by what you made of it and how you extended the universe of Max, Liz and co.

Not bad

Not bad, but your story is very linear, with convenient prophecies and powers thrown around everywhere to save the day.

love it

Can't wait for the next one

Great story!

I loved the story, and I think the details and the plot could stand on their own as a sci-fi/action adventure. Despite the website where it's posted, I felt that the sexual content was actually distracting from the main aspects of the story! It needs extensive editing, lots of misspelled words, and repetition, but it makes me want to be a lycanthrope! I would love to read the rest of the story, and would definitely buy a strictly sci-fi version of it in paperback!

book 2?

loved it. I agree with another commenter -- I found myself scrolling past the sex parts to get back to the sci-fi plot line. I hope book 2 is coming soon??

Looking for Chapter 2

Loved the T.V. series about "Roswell", but this adds a whole new meaning to the whole thing. Very much looking forward for More. Joe D.

great story

can't wait for the sequel