All Comments on 'Trip of a Lifetime'

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Vlad2010Vlad2010over 11 years ago
Need an Editor

Nice story, but would definitely improve with an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
HYFR

Loved it... short, sweet, to the point... my panties are wet...

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