All Comments on 'The Last Boy Scout Ch. 04'

A good tale.....fun to read and over the top enough to keep things light! Thanks.

Whatever you do with Alex in the future will be very well received. But you MUST do a story on his first time with Teri.

Oh fucking sucking wonderful, pure debauched and blissed up fucking and sucking. What would I not give to eat out these lush cunts,sucking and fucking till we pass out, only to start over as soon as we come round. I just love drinking cunt nectar.

Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK

You wrote a great series and I love the way you write your stories!!! I hope that you continue writing about Alex and how his adventures continue with Shannon, The Sisters and Teri. I would like to see you write a story about Teri losing her virginity. Keep up the good work.

Mark

I'm being greedy,I know. This was quite the culminating frolic to punctuate impeccable three installment backstory. I would put forth this story would have been well & truly sublime if Alex had to patiently break down a femme-fatale bitch or Ice Princess or even bona-fide royalty who finally, finally lowers her drawbridge with the last installment.

By the 2nd continuation, Alex had all the birds within easy reach, if not in hand. One needed to hold out to challenge, tease and deny him until the last, crucial moment.

That being said, the repartee was especially witty with sumptuous, usually unique description for each fair maiden of the moment being attended to as only Sir Alex can. Well Dominique & Heather are probably hoping this Lone Star Knight pitches tent again. Here's to hoping Tx Tall Tales has time & sees fit to tell us all.

Please continue. Just because the camping trip is over doesn't mean the story is. The dating arrangements made with the sisters need a story too. Teri's first time and the teacher too.

This was the best story with the most intriguing characters that I have read in ages! I am disappointed that I finished the series. I want more! Please continue with this group. It is witty, charming, and incredibly sexy. I was excited from the very beginning through the very end. Your writing is excellent and the dialogue is consistently well done throughout the chapters. You must write more. I know that Alex's relationship with Teri is fertile ground (no pun intended) for so much more and Ellen would be a luscious addition. Keep up the good work and I wish you great success!

I had fun reading this! I'm looking foward to more of Alex's adventures, TY TTT.

LeFrog08

I like your stories and this one was one of the best. I'm hoping to see more of this group.

Thanks

Thanks for a great read - really enjoyed all the stories and hope you keep the characters going in further adventures.

Hope you continue with this story line. One of the best I have read. Keep it coming.

All honesty, best series I have ever read. Biggest disappointment is that you mentioned you didn't have any more extensive stories for this. I would love to discover how everything develops with the sisters going forward, with Teri and Shannon. Please don't stop, I beg of you

You made us wait long enough. I was looking for this chapter all day yesterday.

The four part series was great reading and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was especially interested in the Shannon character as I had some fantasies about a couple of my teachers when I was in school. We also had 3 sexy sisters move into town my senior year who were real pieces. Reminded me of Julie and Lisa.

Keep writing the stories. You have a talent and we readers appreciate it.

The story and do Hope you bring back Alex and the Girls. Teri needs to be Broken in.

and Shannon will need a few Follow-ups. Then Alex and Lisa going to college leaving Teri and Julie behind for a Year.

Excellent, more, much more. I want to read about Teri's deflowering and the menage a trois with sisters and Alex, John and Dominique and then John and Teri. And let us not forget about Max and Wendy. i want to read about them. i just want to fuck Shannon in the ass.

Like all the comments above, I loved this series and desperately want some more stories involving these characters! I particularly enjoyed the light play between the girls, it fit nicely into the story and was very hot.

While you said that you had more planned out for the early relationships between Alex, Shannon and John, I'd also love to read more about Alex's involvement with Lisa, Julie and Teri (and the girls with each other).

Really loved the series and the great writing. I would like to read about Teri and Alex getting together.

I love your work.

I am a sucker for a good story. You spin such a good web, you could be a spider.

Please expand this story and branch out and develop the characters.

and hope you will follow my suggestion to have Alex and Shannon end up together with kids, etc.

Thanks for another great series. The Perfect Game is my favourite series on this site, and once again Tx delivers the goods. Very very good holiday read!

I was injoying your tail I had a little hard time keeping up with all the girls I think there was to many from time to time and some of them seemed to be pushed to the side just waiting for you to get back to them. I would like to see how you take it from here but don't forget about the sex after all this is what we come to this sight for. LOL just try to keep it real that why I like your stories they streach the envelope a bit from real life but not so far as to loose it to total fiction. Hey we all know that this would be totally unreal to really happen to many jealous personalites to make things really work but one could hope to be the main guy in this story.

I have to say I'm looking forward to move adventures of Teri. Great story man.

this and the perfect game were one of the best stories I have ever read. loved the characters please continue if you can :)

There are not enough superlatives to describe this wonderful story. An excellent story that has to continue. You are definitely one of if not the best current writer on Literotica. More please

Terri needs to have her first with Alex before she can move on or in. Great story, looking forward to more.

Keep it up my friend, these are some of the best stories I have ever read. Keep up the good work.

good stuff! would like to see a conclusion for teri and dominique at some point! And keep max around for the naivete ;)

I love your writing style. Cannot wait for the next installment whatever it is.

As an Eagle Scout myself, I truly enjoyed this story! Thinking about joining the Outdoors Club ;)

Please keep it coming and others

Wow, great series but you need to continue this at home somehow and tell us about him and Teri doing the deed, and how things continue with Miss Shanon and all of the girls. Not fair to stop it now.

Great story, great characters and so much potential for continuing the series. I hope Alex is number 1 for Teri and hope the whole gang is there to see it.

what happens when they get home?

Lots of potential stories stemming from this one. Great characters, all deserving their own tales, or at least appearances in the others' stories. Very well done, and I'd love to see more from these characters.

I thought the story was great. Moved at a good pace without any flat spots. But I guess a little sex can cover most any flat spot. I read some of your stories a few months ago and enjoyed those as well. I think that I will anchor myself on your stories page for a while, reading what I haven't covered yet while I wait for some more new ones.

Thanks again.

Sailor 61

u r simply the bet on this site....big fan here

Curb your impatience to publish and tidy up the final editing. Brilliant story - wish I'd been on that camp.

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, MOARRR!

Loved the story, not at all like my camping days in East Texas.

Keep up the good work!

This is so good it can't be described! You need to go on with there lives from this point forward!

Please add one last chapter with Teri getting it. Please!!

Add A CHAPTER WITH TERI GETTING IT PLEASE

id love it if you continued from hear!!!!!

I'm liking a lot of your series, and I really hope I get to read more about Alex and the girls. Keep up the good work :)

Absolutely excellent! I agree with the comments about seeing Teri get it for the 1st time.

Your work is among the best on this site. Having read, I think, a thousand or so entries, I can say that your pacing, plot development and sexual chemistry building is.....impressive. Easily in my top 3 favorite authors.

Nicely done!

The lucky fucker, all that suckalisious fuckalisuos cunt, absolute sex heaven.

I just love to get drunk on cunt juice prior to fucking the girls to heaven.

Cunt lapping sex maniac UK

I keep checking your stories to see if you have updated this story. This needs a final couple of chapters to take it to a fantastic conclusion. Thanks for a great story!

Loved it! Best erotic I've ever read! But yes you should defiantly do a follow up to this. 10/10

This is a really great story. Well written and developed. More would be welcome.

Love the character development but I want more. Please?

Scale

I absolutely loved this story. The only way it could have been better is if he had gotten Teri too. I was honestly rooting for him to choose Teri over the others, but wasn't surprised by his choice.

Tall Tales you are a motherfucking inspiration. Your Gamer Girl story and this on have got to be the top 2 stories I've read on this site by a long shot, and pretty far up there in the all time list too. Genius, man, fucking genius.

Terri missed out....

one of the best stories on the site!!

The best story I have read, very moving in more ways than one. I would love to see ch 5 6 7 8 9.

I've read so many of your stories and I keep wishing I was a character in some of them... no more so than these...

Awesome writing... truly.

You really need to continue this series as it is the best that you have written voted all four 5 stars

And, whatever you do, please let Alex take Teri's virginity. Definitely Alex, not John.

Is a bottle of 20 year old Knochandhu (straight malt tae ye rye guzzling Sassenachs) and a red headed woman to pour it :-) Really hope Shannon finds happiness

I keep returning to this story when I've 'nothing' better to read. Fabulous!

Loved the series & would love to hear more about Alex & Ms. Shannon & John.

The references in this story about their history left some big questions.

Loved it!!!!! So sexy!!! :)

Have read this three times still gets me hard. Got a little misty at times but loved it. I agree Alex should be the one to get Teri first but make it with the sisters present.

It's terribly annoying when you find a really good series and the author leaves you with a teaser. Wonderful 5* series

You absolutely can not leave it this way. Though I've seen when this series was released, you should revisit and reprise this story. I understand you may have other works in motion but hope you continue this venue. Being an Eagle Scout myself, and an accomplished martial artist, I can relate to Alex Hamilton's frame of mind, but no where as lucky in the piece with the Samuelson sisters, Shannon, Teri, and Heather. Please continue this story. 5 stars mate

Amazing in every way. Somewhat surprised he didn't take Teri's cherry, but thats ok.

I really love this storyline. I've read it 4 times already, and keep coming back to it.

I would really like more with these characters, both prequels and sequels!

When will you continue the story like you promised?

more sir, please.

when are you going to finish this story would like to see how hke handles a date with

the two sisters.

This storyline is one of the better ones I've read on here, you should continue with this as if seems that you've only just touched the tip on what is a great tale.

Thank you very much for this amazing story. I can't thank you enough for keeping John and Max out of it as much as you did, with John only kissing Teri and "stealing" Dominique away from the party. You may call me a hypocrite or whatever but while I like the sharing between girls I don't like sharing between guys in these kinds of stories. One guy - more than one girl - that's how I like the Group Sex genre.

If you ever get around to another installment of this series - I would personally really like to see Alex and his new girlfriends and 'other' new friends in their natural setting - perhaps set like a month or so after this. Them together at school, sneaking away during recess and lunch for some fun (especially hot doing it with the teacher at school) and even after school and weekends. And, again, if I could urge you to keep involvement of other males in any follow-up chapters to a minimum? :)

Anyways - 5/5 series, easy. Also really great work with not only this series but Gamer Goddess series as well, and first chapter of Two Moms, Two Laps.

I've never left a comment before, but with this story I feel like I have to. The story was so sweet, and hot, and... I don't know.. almost perfect! It's not just some dirty story which you read and then felt ashamed and uneasy, on the contrary, this story cheered me up, besides I enjoyed myself quite a few times during reading the series). Thank you very much! You rock!

The best series I have read on this site, hands down. Please please please write more about Alex, and the twins, and Miss Shannon! :) maybe a side story about Dominique and John?

Just finished reading the four chapters in one session. I couldn't stop reading! I really enjoyed the story and I look forward to more (please!)

Thanks!

I could not stop reading! Please, please write more. I would love a continuation of this storyline, or, if you feel so inclined, head off into a new direction.. I eagerly await...........

You are truly a prince of all authors.

Please add more to his adventures following this story. What happens next to him.

Thank you for this tale. Its an enjoyable read.

I truly enjoyed this whole story. Alex is a really likable person and I would like to see more about him and his girlfriend. Not to mention his bestie. Please write another series about these characters.

Very nice work.

Absolutely loved it. Completely over the top but so what? It is a great erotic story.

I keep rereading. More please!

I wish you would write about teri.

But your ending sucked so much left hanging!!!!

As usual another great story. Would love to see a continuation of this story maybe what happened with Alex and the sisters or between Alex and Teri, with so much left hanging it could go anywhere.

Look forward to more of this story and reading more of your stories on here.

more please?????????????

Attention to the little details, in depth about the sex scenes.

Easy to forget you aren't reading a novel with the characters and sub plots.

Truly a great read and added to favourites

PLEASE write another chapter, or three!! By far the best erotic story I've ever read. But I have to know happens with Teri - I simply fell in love with her! ....along with Julie...and Lisa...and Heather...and fuck it - I love 'em all!! :)

Man, I cannot get enough of your stories. They are an inspiration. This story deserves to be explored further, definitely was looking forward to seeing Teri lose her virginity and was a little disappointed that it didn't happen. Either way, my hat's off to you good sir. Keep up the good work.

I meant to hit the favorite story link and accidentally voted 3 stars instead. This is definitely worth 5 stars in my opinion.

Great story but you need to keep it going

Keep writing this story with these characters, ESPECIALLY Teri. I fell in love with these characters and Jesus give me writing lessons because even the parts that weren't making my cock leap into the air were written beautifully.

DONT STOP WRITING

almost too many options.

Teri is one unanswered question.

What happens with Miss Shannon at the end of the year?

How do the sisters cope in the real world?

John and Dominique?

Max and Wendy?

no one cares about Dr. Dan

Can the boy scout survive with all the attention?

an enquiring mind wants to know.

I loved all the characters in this series. The story itself was great and actually had plots going; great job! You have so many options on how you want to build on this series. I'd love to read about prequels and sequels...PLEASE write more on:

1. The history between Alex, Miss Shannon, and John...how did they meet? How did ur sexual tension start between Alex and Shannon? Etc.

2. Teri. I wanna know if she loses her virginity to Alex.

3. Dominique. I wanna know if he ends up fucking her til her eyes roll back and she gets crew pied like a sexy slut you e built her up to be

Tx... If I'd have a hand in writing I'd only wish to be half as good as you because being as good as you is almost blasphemy

Am I to assume this is the end of the series? Hope not, reading by your comments you "have other works your committed to?" It's been 3 years, is "The Last Boy Scout" finished?

You need to finish the threads like the first time with Teri

Please write more stories like this. I searched everywhere, but did not get this particular combination of umm fantasies. This particular combination is one of a kind. Sisters, teacher, girlfriends, camping. Wow. More please!!!

you said you had a couple stories floating around about some of these characters? I would love to read them if you were willing to share