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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/04/13

Nice story.

As the title of my comments say, a nice story with an excellent build-up in the story line. The sexual tension and anticipation of the two characters was a wonderful change of pace from the usual story.

You also managed to not have the glaring spelling and syntax errors that detract so greatly from the enjoyment of other stories. A hearty thank you, and and a fervent wish that you continue writing.

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by rightbank12/02/16

very nice

and a lot of fun.
looking forward to Ch. 02

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