All Comments on 'Doctor's Appointment'

Learn to proof read and use spell check. Several times " i " was used when it shoulc have been " I " for first person singlar.

...where the writer uses the lame premise of telling the reader that they (the reader) is in the story.

I'm 6'1" tall (but in a wheelchair), 270 lbs. and have a big, bushy gray beard, so I am reasonably certain I was not the person dressed in nurses' stockings and GoGo boots.

Sorta ruins any suspension of disbelief I might have had if the author had just avoided this premise.

I'm just sayin'...

That is a story told in the first person. The main character is telling the story from their point of view. It doesn't mean the reader is in it b/c they are reading the word 'I' at the beginning of the sentences. Lots of stories are told from the first person point of view.