All Comments on 'Caught and Punished Ch. 02'

by MollyRedTape

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Continuity

Reasonably well-written story with believable characters. Do watch your consistency, however, as you said she was handcuffed and also that her hands were tied. Pick one and be consistent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Heh, consistency is apparently not a concern here. He has a problem with cheating, but wants to share her with all his friends and get sloppy seconded even more. What the fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Don't Stop Now

We want to see him beat the little cheating cunt until she's howling and screaming for him to hit her harder and harder.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
not cool

some may find domestic abuse sexy. I don't. youre fucked up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Stop using the word squirt, it's gross and not sexy at all. It's ruining an otherwise good story.

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