All Comments on 'How to Tame a Succubus Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
so yummmmy

i wish my encounter with women was as hot as this

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please continue

I really enjoyed this story and I hope you continue :)

marldude1marldude1about 10 years ago

loved it, more please

xcorchxcorchabout 9 years ago
Please Continue

A very nice read i hope that you can pick this enchanting tale up again. I would love to see the character build up of the both protagonists

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Just OK

The plot got a little better by the end, but the story is moving so slowly it is hard to stay interested. The succubus is still to easily controlled by her master.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
love it, Post MORE

love it, pacing is fine but too short, try releasing longer parts or release them sooner.

I like the concept, this story has great potential, I wonder how the paladin will get her into the order, will she ever transform into something other than a succubus(like a siren or valkarie)

The story of how the palladin finally tames her heart along with her already enslaved body will be a good read.

They could have good adventures together, I wonder if they'd ever meet the demon queen.

P.S. don't make the succubus hairy, also can she lactate or get pregnant?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Excellent story

Nicely written. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Chapter 3?

Fantastic. Waiting for ch 3!

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