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by Anonymous

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by ineedutwo12/28/12

Keep going!! Maybe both will be in it

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by Nitro7065212/29/12

Good start

I liked this very much. You seemed to hit it right on point with describing the young girls feelings. I got a bit confused on the sudden change from being at the scene of the accident and then instantly in this older man's house. Not enough to take away from the story though. More to come????
4 stars.

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