but every time he submitted it with the note that it came from there, Literotica returned it to him with a note that you can not list another website nor can you mention another web site when publishing a story here. You guys can mention it in comments but authors can not when submitting it to be published. So tell me - how is an author to pay homage to someone or something else? Give the guy a break for fucks sake.
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Anonymous01/09/13
Shehad it coming
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Anonymous01/10/13
So was it worth it?
Best ending ever.
by
Anonymous01/14/13
Short
And Sweet
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Anonymous03/14/13
Brutal
A fine, short, brutal assessment of the power and destruction of an affair.
by
Anonymous04/30/13
Really Good
Right to the point. I have always thought it would be easier to be honest with one person than cheating on two....way too much hassle. I would like to see a continuation story about how the husband found out and what happened to her, the kids etc. 5x5
Good story, still a five, but it ended too abruptly. I was looking for her reaction to her husband's discovery. It's like a typical television mystery; forty minutes of suspense followed by a car chase and a quick confession. I still enjoyed it. Glad I read it.
What a stupid woman she is... throwing away a life wish her children, her husband, her marriage and life. When will stupid people realize that there IS NO SUCH THING AS PERFECTION? It may be raunchy and delectable in the beginning, after the night still comes morning and hangovers...
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Anonymous08/24/13
Five star tale.
Refreshing change from what is usually posted in Garbageerotica.
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Anonymous11/03/13
That's it ..
.. all you can think of is to have the cheating Cu*t come home to a note??
Like my previous spouse, this woman simply thought she was too god damn smart to get caught.
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Anonymous12/23/14
hind sight is 20-20
cpetes story documents how human nature rationalizes its own perverse behaviour and conduct. It's called 'a reprobate mind' or
'a seared conscience'.
5*
“When your hormones are raging and someone is there telling you that you are beautiful and special and fabulous and really listening to you, thoughts of broken families and hearts are a million miles away.”
If everyone with raging hormones and flatterers cheated, there would be no long-term marriages!
“No passion” – How much passion is SHE bringing to the marriage? When was the last time SHE seduced her husband, or responded sensually to HIS seduction? And if she thinks HE’S cheating, call him on it, or divorce him.
If the affair is losing its luster, just end it, you don’t have to confess.
“I have seen how that little slutty receptionist looks at him. How he is always "bumping" into the divorcee across the street.” – Well, which one is it? Or is he having TWO affairs?
I'd like to see CPete come back to this, write how she rebuilds her life. Not RAAC mind you just redemption cause the way i was reading it towards the end she was remorseful.
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Anonymous01/07/16
She would have done it again so good ending.
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Anonymous03/12/16
@illjoy
She wasn't remorseful. The thrill of a new, illicit relationship simply wore off.
Women like her aren't actually remorseful, they only regret that their 'fun' ends at one point.
I was thinking about reading this again till I saw a line very early about passion in the marriage, and saw I had already made the comment I was thinking of - why is it always the husband's job to keep the passion in the marriage? How often do the husbands here compliment their wives and it's not valued because it's "only" their husbands, and they're "supposed" say it, and it "means more" when someone else says it? How often are the husbands refused sex and/or told their attempts to experiment are gross or disgusting? How seldom do the wives seduce their husbands?
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Anonymous12/21/16
illjoy-remorseful??
Eight months of cheating during which she discovers lover is not stud she fantasized. Then the financial cost of having affair depleted her cheating funds
If husband had not divorced her she would have started another affair within a year
Character was written as selfish and immature
Your feeling bad for her makes me think you see her when you look in mirror
English
It was not word for word cantbuymy.
But cpete you should have credited and not all of us go to SOL. Shame on you! 1*
he tried to attribute it to the original web site
but every time he submitted it with the note that it came from there, Literotica returned it to him with a note that you can not list another website nor can you mention another web site when publishing a story here. You guys can mention it in comments but authors can not when submitting it to be published. So tell me - how is an author to pay homage to someone or something else? Give the guy a break for fucks sake.
Shehad it coming
So was it worth it?
Best ending ever.
Short
And Sweet
Brutal
A fine, short, brutal assessment of the power and destruction of an affair.
Really Good
Right to the point. I have always thought it would be easier to be honest with one person than cheating on two....way too much hassle. I would like to see a continuation story about how the husband found out and what happened to her, the kids etc. 5x5
Awe Gee...
Good story, still a five, but it ended too abruptly. I was looking for her reaction to her husband's discovery. It's like a typical television mystery; forty minutes of suspense followed by a car chase and a quick confession. I still enjoyed it. Glad I read it.
What a stupid woman...
What a stupid woman she is... throwing away a life wish her children, her husband, her marriage and life. When will stupid people realize that there IS NO SUCH THING AS PERFECTION? It may be raunchy and delectable in the beginning, after the night still comes morning and hangovers...
Five star tale.
Refreshing change from what is usually posted in Garbageerotica.
That's it ..
.. all you can think of is to have the cheating Cu*t come home to a note??
Thanks ***
For the read.
HA
Fucking cunt was caught!
HA again
9 MONTHS...THE TIME IT TAKES TO BIRTH A CHILD
or to destroy what was already there only this time no one was showing, TK U MLJ LV NV
Extremely well done!
Like my previous spouse, this woman simply thought she was too god damn smart to get caught.
hind sight is 20-20
cpetes story documents how human nature rationalizes its own perverse behaviour and conduct. It's called 'a reprobate mind' or
'a seared conscience'.
5*
Fair
“When your hormones are raging and someone is there telling you that you are beautiful and special and fabulous and really listening to you, thoughts of broken families and hearts are a million miles away.”
If everyone with raging hormones and flatterers cheated, there would be no long-term marriages!
“No passion” – How much passion is SHE bringing to the marriage? When was the last time SHE seduced her husband, or responded sensually to HIS seduction? And if she thinks HE’S cheating, call him on it, or divorce him.
If the affair is losing its luster, just end it, you don’t have to confess.
Re-Reading
“I have seen how that little slutty receptionist looks at him. How he is always "bumping" into the divorcee across the street.” – Well, which one is it? Or is he having TWO affairs?
Come Back
I'd like to see CPete come back to this, write how she rebuilds her life. Not RAAC mind you just redemption cause the way i was reading it towards the end she was remorseful.
She would have done it again so good ending.
@illjoy
She wasn't remorseful. The thrill of a new, illicit relationship simply wore off.
Women like her aren't actually remorseful, they only regret that their 'fun' ends at one point.
Thoughts
I was thinking about reading this again till I saw a line very early about passion in the marriage, and saw I had already made the comment I was thinking of - why is it always the husband's job to keep the passion in the marriage? How often do the husbands here compliment their wives and it's not valued because it's "only" their husbands, and they're "supposed" say it, and it "means more" when someone else says it? How often are the husbands refused sex and/or told their attempts to experiment are gross or disgusting? How seldom do the wives seduce their husbands?
illjoy-remorseful??
Eight months of cheating during which she discovers lover is not stud she fantasized. Then the financial cost of having affair depleted her cheating funds
If husband had not divorced her she would have started another affair within a year
Character was written as selfish and immature
Your feeling bad for her makes me think you see her when you look in mirror
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